August 27th, 2018 at 07:33pm
I KNOW I HAVE BEEN MEANING TO READ THIS AND I KNOW I’M SO BEHIND THE HYPE. And I’m sorry. But, here I am now.
“USUALLY, I BECOME hungry when thinking about food.”
I actually laughed at the first sentence because I feel that on a spiritual level. So much. Already, I liked the main character (Beth) and enjoyed her narration. This is great. I love how you write, everything just flowed so well. I also liked how you described the bakery part – it’s quite vivid.
Reading her interactions with Kian just made me smile. I loved all the details – her noticing his uneven dimples, staring at his lip ring. Ugh, it’s so cute. And the ‘sugar daddy’ part. That part made me chuckle. You can already tell this guy is trouble (not bad trouble, more like cute playful trouble… something a puppy…) ANYWAY. I’m so ready for this!
1. Jonathan's kiss makes her feel on top of the world. BRUH. THATS SO CUTE. Stop making me ship them ugh!! Omg and now she's questioning Kian. Honestly I have 0 idea what to expect from this story at all. So I'm all torn Eunica is dropping some serious truth bombs tho. I love it.
2. OOO ok I like this chapter a lot despite it being short. It's like Kian's chapter. Idk how to explain it but its like giving insight into Kian's role in Beth's life post Eunica's spiel. So now we can see what Eunica (and now Beth) sees about her relationship and feelings towards Kian. Sorry, Kian
3. Awwww and now her mom is involved. Beth's confusion is sooo real though. I wouldn't know who to choose if I had two boys to pick from LOL.
4. Honey and strawberry pie? Um that sounds yummy but is also super irrelevant to this, I'm just always hungry all the time OMG JONATHAN IS HEEEERE. bitch I'm ready. "I want to do a lot of things to Jonathan" LOL girl same. omg I love her almost stream of consciousness trying to figure out what to say to Jonathan after he says he wants to get to know her.
OK JONATHAN IS KILLING ME. THESE WORDS, BRUH, IM SWOOOONING.
THEY'RE GOING ON A DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE
5. omg the last chapter, I don't think I'm ready Oh Kian, poor poor bb Kian. I can actually feel his sadness (or whatever) over the fact that he totally knows things are off between them too. Ok as much as I love Kian, Beth and Jonathan are so stinkin cute. Like Jonathan is like a clueless puppy, I love it.
OMG IT JUST ENDED. OMG SO SOON. I WASNT READY But um Beth, you're slowly falling for Jonathan? BITCH ME TOO WTF
okay okay but in all honesty, I absolutely loved this story. It's such a cute rom com type story that I'd watch the fuck out of on Netflix LOL. And it's just so simple and so cute and everything was unexpected. Legit, I had no clue Jonathan Olsen would come out of left field and do me like that, BUT HE DID.
AND THANK YOU FOR DESIGNATING ME AS UR ~EDITOR~ 'CAUSE I LOVED HELPING YOU WITH THIS.
Personally, I think it would be so cool to read this story in both Kian and Jonathan's POVs. I wanna know what they're thinking and I wanna know more about them! But pls let me know what you decide bc I'm hopping on board already.