Kian - Comments

KIAN YOU HOT MOFO UGH IHYSM
omg cocky Kian lemme love u ugh you sexy lil shit
I SAID CAN I TAKE YOU HOME WITH ME
SHE SAID, "NEVER IN YOUR WILDEST DREAMS"
AND WE DANCED ALL NIGHT TO TH EBEST SONG EVER
WE KNEW EVERY LINE NOW I CAN'T REMEMBER
HOW IT GOES BUT I KNOW THAT I WON'T FORGET HER
CAUSE WE DANCED ALL NIGHT TO THE BEST SONG EVER ;))))
yup i caught that straight up
BUT BETHANY
GIRL
YOU GONNA WANNA KISS KIAN BC KIAN IS HOT HOT AS A TATER TOT

Sorry I took so long to comment! Forgive me
Gosh I loved this, I seriously have not read nearly enough of these type of cute stories on Mibba! I really enjoyed it. The layout is pretty ad easy to read, the banner at the top is lovely too. I like how you write, you do not give off all that many details, and usually I would criticize for that, but in your case and in this story, I do think that it works quite well. You leave the reader to fill in the things with their own imagination, and I liked that, now I'm not saying that you don't describe enough, the ones that you do have are excellent. You've made your characters so cute! Kian is just, god I can't ever tell you. I need more from this story, good job!

GAH. Kian is so cute. I can't. She should just acknowledge her feelings for the adorable boy and forge ahead. Although, that might be too easy. ;) OHHHH, WELL. Hee hee. I can't wait to read more!

KIAN
YOU STUBBORN, DETERMINED LITTLE SHIT
I LOVE YOU
LET ME LOVE YOU
LET YOU LOVE ME
YES I WILL
BUT OMG
and girl u can't deny Kian he will fuck u up
emotionally jsyk

WELL I, FOR ONE, LOVE KIAN.
you have to update sooooon :)

Oh, lawd. AWKWARDDDD. KIAN. SAD. OH MY GOD. I love that they work at a burger joint, though. Too cute. ^_^

I need them to be together oh my God. I ship them so hard already. I adore this. KEEP WRITING, GIRL! :)

The fact that Kian is Dylan O'Brien kind of makes my life right now. KIAN IS SO CUTE I CAN'T OK I JUST CAN'T.

The first chapter was really cute, and I liked how with John, she is all lovey dovey with him but with Kian, it's kind of hot. More lust fuelled, but you could sense that there's going to be a romantic connection soon. I loved the second chapter though, especially since John is leaving And the fact that Kian's his cousin! Lovely plot twist. I've fallen in love with Kian, and I can't wait for more!

okay wow I love this, it's very cute and DYLAN O'BRIEN HELLO
I love the originality of the whole thing and I cannot wait to see what Beth is gonna do about her runaway feelings :)

This is so cute (especially Kian)
The idea of the kissing booth is perfect
I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Sorry it took me so long to reply on this story but I finally got s break.
Holy ohhh man does she love him or not??
I love the chapters being short, there's no rushing or dragging this is the perfect pace for a story like this.
Can't wait for more :-)

BETHANY YOU KNOW YOU DON'T LOVE JOHN
YOU LOVE KIAN BC KIAN IS KIAN AND HE IS ADORABLE AND I LOVE ETHIS

this is so good. I'll be waiting for an update

HAHAHAH. MY JAW JUST DROPPED. THEY'RE RELATED. OH MY GOD. Drama is brewing, I can smell it.

AND THEN JOHN'S LEAVING. OH MY GOD. MORE DRAMA.

Girl, you are killing me with this awesomely intriguing story stawp it.

Just kidding. Don't stop. Just keep writing. Forever. Okay bye. ^_^

Oh my gosh I'm totally in love with this story. First, love triangles are fantastic and this one is going to be so interesting. Second, your main characters are so attractive, omg.

I love when chapters start with dialouge. Not many people seem to do it, but I loved that you did in your first chapter. I also love the idea of a kissing booth, and I love that John was so concerned about it.

And the second chapter, gah. Kian being John's cousin, I can just see a bunch of stuff going down. Ah, I hope you continue to add more to this, because I will definitely keep reading it!

Love Love Love. Please update soon. <3

CAN YOU NOT WITH DAVID LAMBERT? GOD, I THINK BOTH OF THESE GUYS ARE ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS AND I'M GOING TO WANT TO DATE BOTH OF THEM EVEN THOUGH BETH AND KIAN ARE REALLY CUTE AND I HATE YOU FOR MAKING ME FEEL THIS WAY, OKAY.

Cuuuuuuuuuuuuute! I've always thought that would be the cutest thing, if a really cute sweet guy comes to your kissing booth and is all shy about it.
AW
that's about all I can say.

AWWWWW DYLAN O'BRIEN IS KIAN I'M SOBBING THIS IS SO CUTE

Ahh, I have always loved the idea of a kissing booth, so I just love this story! I totally get why John would be worried about the kissing booth! You never know what kind of people go to those types of things. And what did I tell you! A perfect kiss with Kian. I love how she talks about how cute and sweet he is, while still reminding her self she has a boyfriend. It's like she knows it's wrong but she can't help it! The ending really left me wondering what is going to happen between the two of them! Is she going to stay with John? Is she going to see what's going on with Kian? We may never know! This was just amazing!

your layout is beautiful.