August 15th, 2013 at 04:43am
Sorry I took so long to comment! Forgive me
Gosh I loved this, I seriously have not read nearly enough of these type of cute stories on Mibba! I really enjoyed it. The layout is pretty ad easy to read, the banner at the top is lovely too. I like how you write, you do not give off all that many details, and usually I would criticize for that, but in your case and in this story, I do think that it works quite well. You leave the reader to fill in the things with their own imagination, and I liked that, now I'm not saying that you don't describe enough, the ones that you do have are excellent. You've made your characters so cute! Kian is just, god I can't ever tell you. I need more from this story, good job!
omg cocky Kian lemme love u ugh you sexy lil shit
I SAID CAN I TAKE YOU HOME WITH ME
SHE SAID, "NEVER IN YOUR WILDEST DREAMS"
AND WE DANCED ALL NIGHT TO TH EBEST SONG EVER
WE KNEW EVERY LINE NOW I CAN'T REMEMBER
HOW IT GOES BUT I KNOW THAT I WON'T FORGET HER
CAUSE WE DANCED ALL NIGHT TO THE BEST SONG EVER ;))))
yup i caught that straight up
BUT BETHANY
GIRL
YOU GONNA WANNA KISS KIAN BC KIAN IS HOT HOT AS A TATER TOT