Comment Swap lead me to this story..... The layout is to die for, so cute. I read a few chapters and you are a really talented writer. I did feel overwhelmed with all the dialog actions so to speak so maybe use less of that. Also not a huge fan of the arranged marriage but I will have to read some more to see how it fits in with the rest of the story. I do however like that the main character is sarcastic! It adds a certain attitude, I guess would be the most appropriate word, to the story.Excellent grammar and detail. Keep it up and I will be sure to finish reading this at some point in my busy schedule :D
January 30th, 2016 at 07:49am