Four Leaf Clover - Comments

So I'm only a few chapters in to this story, but I'm actually really enjoying it so far. :) Your narration is really nice and each character's voice is very distinctive.
I also really appreciate that Arianna seems somewhat positive and cheerful. I read a lot of stories on here with brooding teenage girl main characters so it's refreshing to have a female lead with a softer personality.
I'm going to continue reading a recommend this story for sure. :) Keep up the awesome writing.

Brian is nuts lol doesn't he remembers he kidnapped her???

YYEEEAAAHHH A UPDATE!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Brian is crazy...but I love it ;) and love is crazy sometimes

Brian is fucking crazy. He want Ariana so much that fry your brain. How much hold up Brian?

Yes yes yes, please update soon i love this so much and Brian is so crazy but i love him xxxxx

Brian is like a crazy man, I don't get him lol he doesn't want to see how she feels :(

The Master Brian comment has me curious. But Brian himself if starting to make me mad. I mean aside from the fact that he feels like he's doing nothing wrong, can't he see that she's not happy like at all with this situation? Does he honestly not feel guilty about what he's doing at all? Update soon

Brian's really starting to frustrate me. Well not him so much as the fact that he doesn't see that what he's doing is wrong. And the longer it goes on, the more I'm starting to wonder does he truly not realize he's doing all the wrong things or is just telling himself he's not doing anything wrong. The way her outburst seemed to hit him is making me curious. But even despite that, he's pissing me off because he's this obsessed psychopath, and he still manages to pull at my heart strings. Seriously, the way he kept wanting to go and comfort her made me almost consider looking over all the things he's done. He can't do that. At least he had enough sense to leave her alone for a while.

But now Jimmy's intrigued. And I just can't help but think that his interest in her isn't going to be good. Far from it, especially with Brian's on top of that. I'm cringing, and I don't even know what's going to be happening there. Though I can say I wasn't expecting it, so that's something.

The Master Brian comment has me a little curious as well. I'm curious what that was supposed to mean exactly. I'm also curious to see what's going to happen with Brian being so consumed with thoughts of Arianna. Loved the update! :D

I wonder what it is

The first half of the chapter almost had me feeling something for Brian, I'm not quite sure if I would go as far as to say I feel sorry for him, but, there were moments where I thought he genuinely wanted to make Arianna feel better. Maybe her outburst finally broke through the fog of his brain and penetrated enough to make him realise some things. Obviously, he still doesn't see what he's doing is wrong but, I don't know, him wanting to go back to her and comfort her, tugged on my heart strings a little. I don't think I want to know what happens when he does lose control though D:

The prostitute's tits line still makes me laugh so much better than what I came up with XD

and he’d let that Master Brian take over completely. And he could be a jackass.
I'm curious to know who this "Master Brian" character is, if it's like a different side to Brian, which I'm imagining it would be, like an alter ego? Is Brian that fucked up that he has some kind of split personality? I'm so excited to find out! XD

And now Jimmy's intrigued by her, from what you told me, and I can't quite remember everything you did tell me cause I have the memory of a gold fish lately, Arianna is in for a rough ride

I really liked this chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing how the job goes, if Brian can get his mind in the game enough to complete it without a hitch, or if Arianna will continue to consume his mind so much he fails.

Can't wait for more honey bee! :D

Hmm. This is a BDSM story? :O Master Brian say something.

Oh my god! It's back! Yay!
I wanna find out Brian's past. He's confusing me.

Holy shit. Brian is so fucked up. XD
He totally reminds me of Patrick Bateman from American Pyscho. So cool and calm and collected yet, at the drop of a hat he cracks and goes nuts. It is like he's suffering from Bipolar, or some other kind of mental illness, he flips so easily. He's got it into his head that Arianna is meant to be his, but he forgot to ask her permission first.

I feel kinda sad for him though, he's so deluded. He really does believe that Arianna is his. He has this whole plan worked out for their future. I wonder if his cool exterior will start to crack more if Arianna speaks up for herself and tries to fight back more?

I feel sad for them both, the poor girl is trapped in some mad guy's house without any concious way of escape for her. And Brian is just completely fucked up, so much so, I feel bad for the guy, he obviously needs help!

I have a feeling the more Arianna acts up, the harsher Brian will be with her. I hope I'm wrong and she finds a way to escape soon!

Another awesome update! :D

Seriously Brian is freaking me out. Like did he forget to take meds or something? Can't wait to read more though

Fucking chills, dude. My back's crawling like crazy. Brian's so creepy, and I love it. And he's bipolar as hell too. How can he just flip from being pissed off as hell to being all nice and mild mannered? The fact that he does it so easily scares me even more, and having a small idea of what's going to be introduced later on, it's perfect too for that. Makes me feel that much worse for Arianna.

Also, kind of random question, but just how much older than Arianna is Brian? There's never been an age difference stated, and I'm curious.

This also isn't the longest comment, but I'm kind of out of it and can't make myself write more. Loved the update though!

Meu Deus! Completamente arrepiada com esse capítulo!

Finally I've read the second chapter! Oh God, if I were her I'd be so damn nervous. I love how you wrote her point of view of the whole thing, because it gives a greater feel of both the characters. I'm excited to read more, but I'm totally tired, so it'll have to wait for now lol

Crazy ass mofo

I'm very curious about the man things she had in her house. And now I'm even more curious. I don't know what to make of Brian, I should have see him like a psycho, but he's not acting like one. He hasn't hurt her, or anything. I even was about to say to her to give in already and kiss him lol I don't know what to make of him lol

Oh my God, I've only read the first chapter so far and all I'm thinking is "why has no one ever stalked me like that!".
I'm not really an Avenged Sevenfold fan (Green Day kinda gal), but I'm going to a festival that they're playing at so I though, "what the hell" and began reading it lol.
I really like this so far from what I've read, but it's almost 1am so I can't keep reading, so I've subscribed and going to read more when I get the chance.
Once again, I really like this so far!!
Keep writing because I'll be reading quickly ;) xx