Christmas Curse - Comments

Great plot although these plot's are fairly common, I suggest to gain readers and subscribers you get some action going on, and I love the way you write it up but just like many of us - This story has a few spelling errors, not many just a couple, so proof read if you don't! It's not noticeable but when you take little details into description like I do, sort of hard not to notice.I also love the use of your words and how you describe what they're saying, its not just "Jack said" but you include stuff such as "Jack questioned uncertainly." So it gives us detail on what exactly they're feeling.
This story has potential with it being a slash fiction and great writing skills.
Good luck and keep it up!

So... this is cute I could die. LOL!

Anyway, I totally how awkward Tyler is and how Jack is trying to be friendly and all. And I like their little dialogue in the ending too. I'm really looking forward to where this story will lead to. ^_^

Good luck!