San Diego Warriors Part II: Nate and Lo - Comments

aaaand KIND OF SORT OF CONFESSION, YAAAAAY...i think o_O

I really can't wait to see where this goes. They need some more action between the two ;) great update!

loved the updates so so so much!

I have been on vacation but I an keeping up with the story and love it!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I must say, I'm normally not a huge fan of sequels. Why continue a great story that already has a amazing ending? But I love your new take on it. How it goes into the life of another player and still has my Katie and John in there. Great story and i can't wait to read more :) write on

I wanted to say I am loving the story. I can't wait for each update. I fing myself falling in love with Nate and wanting to find out more about him! Love it!

Can't wait to see how their relationship turns out!

Loved loved loved!!

Well damn o_o
I don't know why but conflicted and angry Nate seems so fricken cute to me

Goddammit you've done it again.
While I can't love any character more than John, Nate comes pretty close. I mean, he's a tool. But at least Lo's bringing his conscience out. As usual, wonderful job and I'm so glad you chose to continue with this sequel.

I really like what you're building here with this fictional franchise. The difference between this and the first adventure is refreshing, and I like these new characters. I definitely have a thing for Nate's rough edges! Plus I still really wish it was real, I'd be writing myself into stories with this team for sure :D
I can't wait to see where this story goes!!

Ahhhhh I loved the last chapter! Can't wait to see what happens!!

The addiction; it's real. I love the ethan/lo problem confusion thing o_o i can't wait for more

Love it already and can't wait for more!!

Love already!