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  • bxgurl95

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    Ok Jesus!
    I didn't even realize the chapter before the epilogue came out until today. I can never guess your endings, but wow!!! It hurt me that she didn't respond but I completely understand and I don't know what I would have done if I was in her situation. I'm glad they are realistic, her life moved on and so did his but they were always connected. I just love this story and you did the characters much justice!!
    Sad to see it go but can't wait for your next masterpiece.
    April 3rd, 2014 at 07:33am
  • xnightchangesx

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    Yeahhh. I'm so happy they ended up together!! (:
    I really loved your story. :)
    April 3rd, 2014 at 05:18am
  • besidethesea.

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    I'm sooo sad that this is over, but I loved every minute of it and I can't wait to read your new story!! Very Happy
    April 3rd, 2014 at 03:55am
  • justSJ

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    Awwww yay :) you should reconsider writing a sequel :)
    April 3rd, 2014 at 03:44am
  • justSJ

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    Ah it's Wednesday I'm ready!
    April 3rd, 2014 at 12:14am
  • justSJ

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    Ahhhh so emotional!! And he said it! I bet that was what he almost said before he left. Pleaseeee let them end up together
    March 30th, 2014 at 12:13am
  • besidethesea.

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    I think there are tears in my peanut butter and banana smoothie now. Thank you. I don't want this to end :((( it's so brilliant!! I'm both praying for and dreading Wednesday.
    March 30th, 2014 at 12:08am
  • bxgurl95

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    Oh that was heartbreaking to read. You couldn't have captured the desperation better. Also at the same time though they were both trying to be the "bigger" person while coming to terms with the fact that they progressed faster and bigger than they originally planned for. This was great and you ll always remember your first love even if it comes to an end or doesn't work out the way you want it to. That was lovely can't wait for the next!
    March 27th, 2014 at 04:58am
  • xnightchangesx

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    I love this story!! Can't wait for the next chapter! (:
    March 27th, 2014 at 04:09am
  • justSJ

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    PS, I hope you update again soon! I was so excited all day for this but I don't think I can wait for the next two haha
    March 27th, 2014 at 02:57am
  • justSJ

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    Awww this was really really sweet but sad. I'd also love it if you do end up having them meet again, both of them decided not to have sex yet because they just couldn't bring themselves to or didn't want to.
    March 27th, 2014 at 02:54am
  • besidethesea.

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    You are a cruel, cruel person! :((((((( (wonderful chapter though!)
    March 27th, 2014 at 02:50am
  • bxgurl95

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    Ugh I'm so sad now!!!
    That reiteration of emptiness at the end was so powerful. Can't wait for Wednesday!!
    March 24th, 2014 at 04:45am
  • justSJ

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    awwww ugh i'm sad this is ending and still praying hard you have them meet up in the future and they end up together ugh
    March 24th, 2014 at 03:24am
  • besidethesea.

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    Please don't tell me you're ending this soon!! I don't know if I'll be able to handle it. I love this story so, so much!! :)) by far my favorite of yours!!
    March 20th, 2014 at 11:53am
  • ButterGirl96

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    Ábout damn time! I knew it had to be coming soon. Loved the update. Can't wait for more.
    March 20th, 2014 at 04:56am
  • bxgurl95

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    There's literally no other way to say I love this besides I close this and you are very strategic in your placement of events. Everything is just perfect! Will be sad to see this go
    March 20th, 2014 at 04:48am
  • justSJ

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    It was super cute! It made me happy for them :)
    March 20th, 2014 at 04:00am
  • bxgurl95

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    Ugh that was so sad. They're young so it's even more heartbreaking to think about how they're gonna deal with the distance. I also love the thought process that Sarah has, how she cares about him and wants to be more physically and is grappling with all of those new feelings.
    March 17th, 2014 at 12:43pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Oh my god that was so sweet! Just wow I just love these two and their progressing relationship ah!!
    March 13th, 2014 at 04:43am