October 14th, 2013 at 10:37pm
OH MY GOD!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! It was a combination of funny, sweet, and sexy :D
Hmm...I wonder where Brian plans on taking her, wherever it will be I'm sure it will be a good time.
“You better be good to her, Rock Star,” Mandy stated as she walked past me en route to the kitchen. “She’s head over heels for you and that’s not something that happens to her very often. You’re the first man she’s started to let in in a really long time, don’t fuck it up.”
Yep, you better be good to her Brian, she is a lost soul trying to find her way back lol. I just might have to kill you if you do but I know you won't because you're a sweetheart and I love you <3
“Hmm, this could be interesting,” she smirked as I turned down the driveway to the Marina. “What could we possibly be doing here?”
“I don’t know, I guess you’ll just have to wait and see,” I smiled, putting the car in park and shutting off the engine. “We can leave our bags in the car, when we get back we can use the showers in the clubhouse.” She looked at me curiously before we both climbed out of the car.
WHAT IS IT?! WHAT IS IT?! I WANNA KNOW!!! LOL.
Aww, that's super sweet. A romantic boat ride, that's too romantic <3
“Having fun?” I asked softly.
“Are you kidding? This is amazing,” she smiled widely. “It’s almost surreal, I feel like I’m dreaming.”
I feel ya there Leah, if I could go on a boat ride with Brian...just wow.
“One day when you’re ready, I want to hear the story about whoever it was that broke you like this,” I said softly as I brushed my fingers across her cheek and she closed her eyes and reached up and grabbed my hand, kissing my palm. “Regardless of what happened, you’re the most beautiful woman I’ve ever laid eyes on and I’m completely crazy about you. I never expected to fall for someone as fast and as hard as I’m falling for you, especially after all of the bullshit I’m going through with my ex, but there’s something about you that I just can’t get enough of.”
God, if Brian said this to me I would be smiling and blushing like a fool and probably a blubbering mess. You are too sweet Brian, just ugh!
OH HELL NO! WHERE IS THIS BITCH AT?! I'M GOING TO KILL HER! Yeah, you should've just ended it because now things are worse than they need to be. I hate girls like that, it pisses me off so much! I like how Brian is so open with her, it's touching. Hopefully, she'll open up to him soon.
Anyways, mmm sexual tension! Who cares, just fuck her already!! lol. Grrr...fine, I'll wait :/
Damn!! Can I have Brian's house please! I love it! That's a pretty big house though for someone living alone though hahaha.
“It’s the second most beautiful view in Huntington Beach,” he said just above a whisper before placing a kiss on my neck.
“What’s the first?” I laughed as I spun around in his arms and faced him and he smirked.
“The one I’m looking at right now,” he grinned and I laughed and shook my head.
“Wow, I walked right into that one,” I joked and he chuckled before he leaned in for a kiss. “I’m sure you use that line a lot, how’s it working out for you?” I laughed.
“I’m two for three,” he said as he shrugged his shoulders and I smiled and shook my head.
“Yeah, what happened with the third?”
“I don’t know, I’ll have to let you know how it works out,” he winked and I rolled my eyes.
There goes Brian with those pick up lines haha. I have a feeling her really means it though.
“So you’re too good to flip a light switch?” I asked jokingly as he went over to disable the alarm. He started laughing and fucked up the code.
“Ahh, stop talking or I’ll keep messing up. I’m already pretty buzzed, I don’t need you to make it more difficult,” he laughed.
“Not my fault,” I smirked, “technology is only as good as the person who’s handling it. It’s not the alarm system’s fault you’re drunk.” He laughed and fucked up the code again.
“God damn it,” he mumbled between laughs and I put my hand over my mouth to keep myself from making him screw it up again. He finally got the code to go through the third time, disarming the alarm. He looked over at me and we both started laughing.
“You good now? Did you finally outsmart it?” I smirked as I tried to bite back another laugh. He let out the most retarded laugh I think I’ve ever heard and I completely lost it.
“Ha, ha, ha, did you finally outsmart it?” He mocked me in the same retarded voice and I laughed even harder.
Omg! This made me laugh! Again, with the awesome banter. I can imagine Brian and his retarded voice and I bet it's pretty funny.
“My Dad was an asshole, he died in an accident when he was drunk driving and killed two other people along with himself. I know how horrible I sound for saying this, but he’s better off dead. He didn’t make many contributions to this world,” I sighed.
Leah! That is so mean! Lol, is it wrong that I laughed at this? It probably is but I just couldn't help it, it's so mean but funny.
“Well, there’s at least one,” Brian smiled as he placed his free hand on my thigh over my dress and lightly caressed it.
“Yeah,” I scoffed, “we’ll see if you’re still excited about that in a few months,” I told him as I took a swig of my wine.
“I think you need to stop being so hard on yourself,” he smiled before leaning forward and briefly pressing his lips to mine. “So if you’re planning on sticking around for a while, I guess that means you would be earning the title of girlfriend,” he smiled, thankfully getting away from my least favorite topic.
“Mmm, would I now?” I smiled and bit my lip. “Are you sure you’re ready to take me on?”
“Only if you’re willing to take on what I bring to the table,” he smirked.
“What’s wrong, you don’t think I can handle you, Rock Star?” I asked and we both laughed.
“It might be too much for you,” he said as he raised his eyebrows.
“Wait, what are we talking about? The size of your ego or the size of what’s in your pants?” I questioned with a smile as I took another sip of my wine and he laughed whole-heartedly.
“Wow, that is such a ladylike thing to say,” he laughed, sipping at his wine.
I think you guys can handle each other ;)
I love the debate they had, I found that rather amusing. But this right here was fucking hilarious.
“I call bullshit! You want to sit there and go on about how everyone is so focused on instant gratification and make it sound like men are the ones to blame, yet you’re sitting here right now and you don’t even have the patience to just wait for the right timing. I’m pretty sure you’re the one who’s obsessed with instant gratification. I mean, fuck, are you related to Sigmund Freud or something?” He rambled as he laughed.
I drained my glass before setting it down next to his which was already empty before moving towards him and straddling his lap. I put my hand over his mouth in attempt to stop him and he just smiled and kept going, trying to pull my hand away.
“Shh,” I whispered into his ear, trying not to lose my balance since I was already considerably tipsy. “Do you hear that?” I asked and he got quiet for a minute.
“Hear what?” He asked with a smirk, his voice still muffled since my hand was over his mouth.
“It’s the sound of you not talking, isn’t it grand?” I laughed and he feigned surprise.
LMAO!! I LAUGHED SO HARD!!
“I may not know exactly what happened yet, but I know that you’ve been hurt in a way that no one ever should be. I’m not perfect either, and I’m not saying that I have the ability to make you forget the things that ever happened. All I can promise is that I will be as patient and understanding as I can while treating you the way you deserve and making sure you know every day how beautiful and amazing you really are,” he told me as one of his hands rested on my bare thigh again. I was speechless for a minute, totally in shock as I processed what he had said.
Aww Brian, I would've been putty right then. I can't stand the sweetness, he's too good to be true!
Mmm yes! Finally smutty time! That was super hot and sweet all at the same time. From now on you guys are officially boyfriend and girlfriend, yay! I hope things go well for them.
To sum it all up, the chapter was great! It had me laughing because of their awesome banter, I swear you are the master of awesome banter. Their relationship is going to be a fun adventure with some bumps along the way, I can just feel it. Again, you are an amazing writer and I am your biggest fan, I don't care what anyone else says, I'm number 1. I'll go crazy on some people if I have to prove my point haha :D Ok, now to go comment on my lovely story, I don't even know where to begin with that haha but get ready for the fireworks because they will be coming fast and furious. Alright, bye!
Thanks for commenting!
Yay! I’m glad you liked this one! I have to admit, this is the story that’s my baby. Everybody has that one that makes them warm and fuzzy and this is the one that does it for me. I don’t know why exactly that is, but it’s true!
Brian has been threatened by the bestie! Mandy will kick his ass if she has to LOL If he hurts her he better watch out.
He is so sweet to Leah! That’s like one of the most romantic things that you can do for someone on a first date (or any date for that matter). He’s falling for her even though he had his heart broken. There’s much more to come about the whole Michelle situation as the story goes on…
Definitely sexual tension! Mmm Can you imagine? FML
I want his house too! I didn’t know how to link pictures when I wrote this chapter because it was one of the first things I posted on Mibba, but if I would have known I would have linked the pictures that I went off of. It was GORGEOUS!!
I can’t lie, I totally got that pick up line from the movie Burlesque! I loved it and decided to use it!
I know you love your playfully/sexy banter and let me just say that this entire story is FILLED to the brim with it! Brian and Leah complement each other so well in this story and they just have amazing chemistry! Glad you enjoyed the debate, I laughed a few times while I was writing it!
There’s more to the story about Leah’s dad, but I won’t say anymore (locks lips and throws away the key)
This Brian is too good to be true! This is the way that I can only dream he is in real life LOL. And OMG the sex in this one…… PLEASE teleport me in there to get me some of that!
Like I said, this story is definitely an amazing adventure! I think you’ll like the next chapter quite well because there is something in there that I know for a fact you’re a big fan of! You ARE my number 1 fan! And I love you!
I can’t wait to read your thoughts on your story!! I’m super excited!! Thanks for commenting and being so awesome!!