Love in an Elevator - Comments

Damn this is by far my favorite Johnny story I've read so far on here. I love this story. filing this one away as a personal fav for sure!

This was amazing! I loved the sex and the sweetness between them. It was also nice to read a Johnny Christ story for once. Loved the dialogue too.

I loved this. And I've gotta say, even though I'm guilty of this as well...

I'm glad Johnny got some love in a story...

Everything I seem to read neglects him. I mean I know it was part of the contest and all, but Like I said, i'm guilty of that as well.

This was amazing and I loved it. I really truly did. Just gotta say it...

Good for you Christ, good for you.

Christ Almighty!! ..... See what I did there?

That was brilliant

OK, so I love realism. Like, love it with a burning passion, otherwise I can't read a story at all. So the moment that I saw you'd put about the character and Johnny bickering over the in laws and they needed time apart, I knew it was going to be an amazing one-shot. Because the realism is there and that's all that matters.

Now- that's an argument! I mean, oh poor short shit! He was gonna propose and boom, she tells Brian she doesn't wanna get hitched! Poor man.
BUT SHE AGREED! HELL YEAH! I know this is fiction and what have you, but I feel very proud of Johnny for getting hitched all of a sudden!

ELEVATOR SEX. One of my few favourite sexytimes in a moving vehicle. That sex scene was so fucking hot, you made everything seem so real- almost as though I was in that elevator with them, in a totally not weird way. Again, I've never thought of Johnny in any kind of sexual way, but seeing him like this- Mama likey!

I love that ending- it's just so awkward! What do you say in that kind of situation? Hey mom...we just spent the last hour having sex- and we're getting married. Woop!

I thought that this was amazing and well worth the wait! Thank you so much for entering my contest, and congratulations on getting over your writers block!