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  • Mother Jellybean

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    This is really good :) So glad I found this story!
    July 8th, 2013 at 08:14am
  • TheRockshowChick

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    I was almost tearing up when I was reading that Devin was getting bashed by the jocks.
    I really like this story :)
    Update soon!
    July 8th, 2013 at 01:49am
  • cr3ature_

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    poor Dev, man. :c
    i like it, update soon!
    July 8th, 2013 at 12:04am
  • deathhallow

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    Haha sorry I will try my hardest to fix that I'm not the best at that stuff but I shall fix it thank you for the feed back but I am happy you liked it this was my first story on here so I was nervous ^^
    July 7th, 2013 at 05:06pm
  • cr3ature_

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    i enjoyed this chapter, but erhm.. there's a lot of capitalization and punctuation errors. the punctuation errors make it hard to read because everything seems like one long line of words. not trying to be rude in the slightest, i just thought i should let you know. c:
    i'm looking forward to an update, soon!
    July 7th, 2013 at 10:03am
  • cr3ature_

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    i dig this, c:
    i think this story has great potential. and i think it could be really great.
    can't wait for the next update!
    July 6th, 2013 at 06:29am
  • deathhallow

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    Awe its cute XD but poor devs has to move...plus new bullys yikes lol
    And if youll concider it id love to be your cowriter...if youd like just tell me so and I shall do my best plus id love to write in balz pov X3 thanks in advance
    July 6th, 2013 at 05:51am