Just a Kiss - Comments

I can't believe their manager thinks what that creep did should just be let go, and that the label isn't taking it seriously. What kind of statement does that make, not only do they not care about keeping the clients that bring in the most money happy, but they also don't care about the safety of anyone on tour. Poor Fiona and Brian just can't seem to catch a break. What happened is awful but Brian can't blame himself. I honestly don't think that Fiona was the direct target, I think it would have happened to any one of the girls if they had gone back to the bus at that time. I hope things settle down for them soon, and that the wedding is drama free!

I don't blame you, I would have made a scene too. I hope he did hear. I just don't understand what kind of person would steal a teddy bear from a little kid, that's just...ugh

@ pawnsinplay
P.S. The Bear was this limited edition bear that my hubby bought me when I was in the hospital over valentine's day a few years ago. Luckily I was able to find the exact same bear on Amazon for $18 and picked it up.

@ pawnsinplay
I didn't see the person who took it, but the chick at the place we got our food from saw him and said she thought he was with us so she didn't say anything. I made a scene in the middle of the Denver airport. I'm not afraid to admit that I went totally momma bear about that. I hope the person who stole the bear heard me and feels like garbage too.

Thanks for the comment! I'll have more within the next couple days, I hope.

...Someone stole Logan's teddy bear?! That is ridiculous! Did you actually see him take it? Did you get it back? Poor Logan! He must have been so upset!

And now on to the chapter. The first half...holy crap, that was hot. Second half...THAT RAT BASTARD! I'm glad he was stopped. And now I'm hoping Brian doesn't kill him. PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

YOU TELL HER, CARSYN! I literally wanted to applaud after she told that betch off, I was so proud of her. I hope to God that's the last we see of Tally. And now the group is going to do karaoke...oh dear God, I'm both excited and horrified. At the same time. I CAN'T WAIT.

Thank GOD Brian noticed the drinks had been drugged before anyone actually drank them. How dare she try to drug them! And she really thinks she'll be allowed back in the bus after what she pulled? I hope to god the girls give her one hell of a reality check.

I'm made up they're going for a Vegas wedding! It's a brilliant idea! I'm upset that Tally has managed to come back though I hope someone stops her from getting back on that bus cos she's only gonna cause more trouble. I hate her so much!

Hope you can update this wonderful story again soon xxx

Go, Fi! I'm so happy someone finally put that tramp in her place and rearranged her face! Cheeky little cow, thinking she could drug everyone and get away with it. Pssh.

Yay for a Vegas wedding! I think it's a brilliant idea, too, just don't tell Brian. We don't want him getting a big ego XD

What the hell?!? How is Tally back!?

I love this story so much.

From their chance meeting outside Johnny's bar, to the so sweet and adorable way Brian asked her to give him a chance, I've loved it all. His proposal was just...wow. I may have had a tear in my eye reading it. Horrible way to find out about her grandmother, though. And timing! The sex is undeniably hot and steamy, and I understand completely it is their own way of getting through it, of letting out all the emptions that are building up.

That angry sex scene, HOLY JOHNNY CHRIST! I love the way you write them, it's not too..technical? You focus more on the emotion and feeling, rather than what is going where and how many. If that makes sense? Haha.

I wanted to punch her mother in the face, how dare she?! After all those years of neglect, she expects Fiona to welcome her with open arms? I don't think so, lady. That lawyer can go and fuck off, too. And when he gets there, he can fuck off some more.

I actually had to laugh at the scene where his ex when nuts and started trashing his house, I could imagine the three of them hiding behind the furniture while Amy went crazy, hahaha. I also love Jimmy in this, and his non filter XD

Same goes for Joseph. I understand that in their tribe they do things differently, there are other ways for them. But to just demand that Fiona marry him? Oh no, that's not gonna fly with Brian, buddy! I loved the way Brian owned him, that was awesome!

The hospital...yeah, they can fuck off, too. She seriously can't think that she can just fire Fiona like that and get away with it? Okay, so I can understand that there are procedures to follow and whatnot, but her grandmother had just died, for god sake! And not naturally, either!

Hmm, who else? Oh yeah, that cop! Just because a person has tattoos, doesn't make them a fucking criminal. I get judged because of my ink all the frickin time, it gets on my nerves so much!

And last, but by no means least..Tally. Oh, wow. She really is something else, isn't she? I mean, what? Where does she get off thinking she can act like that and talk to the guys' girls in that way? I actually fist pumped when Johnny told the driver to stop so they could throw her off the bus, go JC! I'm so happy for him and Zoe, they're gonna have a little baby! :D

And like pawnsinplay said, I love how tight knit the group is. For the others to just up and leave at a moments notice and go with Brian and Fiona to her grandparents' house, just shows how close of a bond they all have. I think it's really nice.

I can't wait to read more, I hope the girls go all out on Tally and really kick her ass! I'm not violent, honestly I think that's everyone ticked off my "to punch" list I'm gonna stop ranting all over your comment box now, haha.

Each story of yours that I've read, I've fallen completely in love with! Now I shall stop talking XD

I'm loving all this drama! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update again soon. Xx

TWO UPDATES, YAY! Okay, here we go.

I wanted to seriously punch that lawyer in the face. How dare he hound Fiona and try to make her feel guilty about not wanting to speak for her mother. He has no right, Lissa has no right to want it either. Fiona has every damn right to refuse to have any kind of relationship with her mother, considering everything that's happened. I knew she'd go visit her in prison though. I was so proud of her, especially after that speech, my god. If Lissa tries getting in contact with her again, after all those words, then she's just plain stupid. I don't know if I mentioned this in previous comments, but I love the relationship that the guys all have, both with each other and with the girls. They're all so supportive and just...there for one another. I love it. It makes my heart melt

TALLY. I despised her from the moment she opened her mouth. I have to agree with the comment below - she is everything that I hate in fangirls. Thinking the worst of the girls, thinking she knows what the guys want and what they deserve. It's crap. They're with women who make them happy and no one has the right to say anything or speculate about it. No one knows what their personal lives are like and no one has the right to. It makes me so mad! And this Tally is so damn clueless! The guys have all told her, on more than one occasion, to watch her mouth or get lost but she just does not get it. I'm actually looking forward to her next attempt at getting to the guys, and the backlash that will hit her in the face. I just hope she doesn't actually do anything that hurts anyone.

Tally is everything I despise in fangirls, seriously. Please let one of the girls get hold of her, bring out the claws a little. Definitely can't wait to read more. (:

I seriously can not believe that they were trying to accuse Brian of murdering her grandmother. That just made me so damn angry. How DARE they?! I wanted to clap for Brian when he told them off, and so eloquently too lol. And that stupid bag, wanting her to hand in her resignation. I hope Fiona teaches her a lesson when they get home. She's got enough on her plate, she shouldn't have to deal with bullshit at work too. But that sexytime with Brian...well. Let's just say I feel a little hot under the collar right now lmao. DAMN YOU AND YOUR PERFECT WRITING!

Thank you for the update! And I hope Friday went okay!

I've just read this story from the very beginning and I loved every word of it! I'm hoping you'll be updating again very soon. Xxxx

Love this! Just read the whole story in the span of an hour. lol.

I hope you can come off the prednisone soon! That drug is a blessing and a curse all rolled into one if on it for too long. I'm assuming they'll be weaning you off it though? I hope so. I've seen steroid withdrawal first hand and it is not pretty. I'm glad to hear you're doing well and that your specialists are keeping a close eye on you. Will you let me know how the CT and CTA goes this Friday, and if you can come off the prednisone? I'll throw a party for you!

Being born without a thyroid is just the icing on the cake, isn't it? That's pretty damn rare in itself. All those doctors appointments and tests must have been a pain in the ass after a while. I know with my own condition, there was a point where I was just done with the whole thing - done with the doctors visits and the consults, done with all the ECG's and ultrasounds and echo's and I was just like "if I have go to for one more stress test, I am going to lose my fucking mind." But it's just par for the course, right? It can be inconvenient and redundant but when it comes to health, it's worth it in the long run.

I can only imagine how devastating that must have been, especially for someone so young, like I said before, who's about to get married and wants to one day start a family. Sounds like you have a pretty great man in your life though, which always helps Not to sound insensitive but do you know if you'll be able to have more kids? And that 'friend' of your husband's sounds like a real tool. Like, get a fucking clue buddy! Thank god he's no longer in your lives, neither of you need that kind of negativity.

You are an amazing person. It sounds corny but i have to say it because it's the truth. I admire you so much for being so positive and strong and for getting where you are despite your doctors telling you not to. Thank you for telling me your story! And sorry for being nosy

LOVE THIS STORY!

@ pawnsinplay
I'm actually doing great, according to my specialists. I have a routine CT and CTA this Friday to make sure all is the same since they don't like to rely on my monthly blood work alone, but if all is good then I get to come off the prednisone completely. I'm on so many medications that some people ask me why coming off one is such a huge deal, but if I get rid of that steroid then I'm having a fucking party! Anyway, yes, going to the emergency is usually the way to deal with issues of certain symptoms such as stroke like symptoms, heart attack, etc. But I don't have to tell you that! My doctor always says that going there will get me into a CT or MRI faster than waiting for an appointment if he were to order one.

But for smaller flare issues, I just call and have my normal check up appointments moved earlier. But I haven't had a flare in years (knock on wood), not since my infusion therapy was added to my treatment. For the last 4 years my doctors have been saying "you're inactive and stable", which is a pessimists way of saying "it looks like remission". They don't say the "R" Word because they're afraid to jinx it.

Crazy thing is, this isn't my first brush with a serious health condition. I was born without a thyroid, so I've been a pin cushion/ case study since the day I was born!

And you're right. A positive attitude is really the only way to get through something like this. For some people (like me) this diagnosis is devastating. It's completely life altering and many don't know how to cope. They lose their chance for a lot of things. I was told I couldn't work, ever, and that kids were never going to happen. My wedding was 6 months after I was diagnosed and at my diagnosis meeting they told me I should think about postponing or canceling or all together (I did neither). For someone like me, it was a lot to take in. And then, like 5 days after I was diagnosed a friend of my husband's came over and was taking about his problems with his wife and how he's such an ass hole cause she was pregnant and he didn't think he was ready for kids and then she lost the baby and all I could say was "dude, bitch to me when someone destroys your whole world. At least she can have kids."

That person is no longer in our lives.

Being positive is important, and having positive people around you is just as important. So. ... yeah.

That is crazy! I am still so shocked right now, I don't even know what to say haha. But other than having to go to the ER when symptoms flare up (is that how you'd even describe it?) you're doing well right? And it sounds like you're staying positive through the whole thing, which is great! I think a positive outlook and a healthy lifestyle is the only way to really deal with a diagnosis like that right?