I really liked this! Your description drew me in immensely, and I love your title. Please update, it certainly does not stink! Only piece of advice I have is to make paragraphs, so it makes your story look longer and it's easier for the reader to read. I am HIGHLY interested in this story, and you are SUCH a talented, gifted writer. Please never stop writing because you are truly magnificent at it!!
Wishing you the best!
Olivia
Also, if you ever need any help on this site, with layouts or making your paragraphs, let me know, I'd be more than happy to help! :)
Wishing you the best!
Olivia
Also, if you ever need any help on this site, with layouts or making your paragraphs, let me know, I'd be more than happy to help! :)