I do like the story, but I agree with @ActionAngel. A few grammatical errors and you might want to proofread. In my opinion, though, I thought it was good. I liked that you didn't go too much in depth by explaining Rhiannon. I thought it was cute that she was worried to be put in Ravenclaw! But I'm glad she was put in Gryffindor because that really helps the storyline of her getting to know the Weasley twins. I love Harry Potter and have all the books. I've been into them since I was little and I liked the story because the twins usually aren't in the spotlight, and this puts them there!
August 18th, 2013 at 04:00am