Oh my gosh, he is suck a jerk. Nothing gives you the right to cheat on your future wife and to not feel guilty about it... ug!!!
Not a huge fan of revenge, but I think it's okay in this case. Kind-of reminds me of what Carrie Underwood did in her music video "Next Time That He Cheats"
Overall, great one-shot and I can see the connection between this story and the picture. Good luck in the contest! :)
When she saw him on the bed with another woman, I expected her to throw things and just scream like a manic. I know I would do that if I caught my man cheating on me. So I'm amazed at her level-headedness. Or it's probably because she's too stunned to react violently.
Thumb up for you, girl! Show him girl power. There are plenty of good men out there.