As far as I know, the title needs every word to start with a capital letter, I think it's one of the rules. And through out the story your capitalization is terrible. You start of sentences with lower case letters and then in the middle of them you chose you use a capitalized letter. That was extremely annoying to read. I'll show some examples.
''. you know like '' The y is lower case, shouldn't be.
'', Wanna be pops, '' this first of all doesn't make much sense, and the w should be lower case.
''my story til the '' til should be until.
''She like Pink'' this should say ''she likes pink'' you misused a word and used an upper case letter.
'' father so i didn't change '' The i should be capitalized.
I won't show you anymore mistakes, I think you get the message. Plus, you started off your story by saying Hi. I don't like that, it makes the story seen immature, and it really put me off reading. Your grammar needs serious work, I found myself having to re read several sentences and still having them make no sense to me. I suggest you re read this and sort it out. Put your idea is good, I don't mean to come across harsh, you're not a bad writer and please don't stop writing because of constructive criticism, but if somebody doesn't point these out you won't learn from them. Keep writing!
So I hope you don't mind constructive criticism
As far as I know, the title needs every word to start with a capital letter, I think it's one of the rules. And through out the story your capitalization is terrible. You start of sentences with lower case letters and then in the middle of them you chose you use a capitalized letter. That was extremely annoying to read. I'll show some examples.
''. you know like '' The y is lower case, shouldn't be.
'', Wanna be pops, '' this first of all doesn't make much sense, and the w should be lower case.
''my story til the '' til should be until.
''She like Pink'' this should say ''she likes pink'' you misused a word and used an upper case letter.
'' father so i didn't change '' The i should be capitalized.
I won't show you anymore mistakes, I think you get the message. Plus, you started off your story by saying Hi. I don't like that, it makes the story seen immature, and it really put me off reading. Your grammar needs serious work, I found myself having to re read several sentences and still having them make no sense to me. I suggest you re read this and sort it out. Put your idea is good, I don't mean to come across harsh, you're not a bad writer and please don't stop writing because of constructive criticism, but if somebody doesn't point these out you won't learn from them. Keep writing!