Tate - Comments

Thank you! That's great to hear. I'm still in the process of developing the characters, so check back on the posted chapters for changes. I have good ideas for this story!

Wow, I'm really glad that I subscribed to this. I really like this so far! It's really interesting and you've definitely pulled me in. I also really like that the chapters are so short. It adds a really nice kind of stylistic break from the norm and it's really effective for your story, I feel. I'm really excited to see where this goes!

Hmmm, my interest is piqued. I now must know everything there is to know about this story. I want to know who (or what?) Tate is and why it's significant to the plot line. I can't wait until characters are actually introduced and backstory is given. If there's not anything I love better than a short introduction, it's when there's some kind of amazing back story to go with it. And I feel like this one's going to have one. In 75 simple words, you have got me questioning what happened. Why did they go to the dead beat town in the dead beat state? Was it on purpose or was it a complete accident and they just got stuck? These are the questions that shall keep me awake tonight! Really though, I'm interested in seeing where you take this and how it develops. I'll be anxiously awaiting an update. ❤

I'd really love to read this, but I can't. You'll have to go into your layout and fix the line spacing (that looks like the problem, at least).