Monster - Comments

@sempiternal.

Thanks for the comment. I was trying to make it dark and sort of seem like a children's book because I enjoy experimenting with writing types. :)

This was incredibly interesting. Very dark and actually sort of disturbing, I loved the way it was written. Very different and experimental. Most people don't like stories written in this format so they don't get a lot of attention - which is extremely sad and unfortunate because sometimes they're the most beautiful of all. And this was beautifully dark. I love how it was set so far into the past and how you described Sam to have cat ears and a tail. It was all extremely confusing and... child like at first. Like it was innocent. And as it progressed it got darker. I loved that about it. The epilogue was so helpful and I think it's awesome that you put that in there. Sometimes it's nice when the author leaving it be is nice, but I just really appreciated the explanation. I think that it added the depth to the story that made it so nice. Wonderful job! The fact you wrote it in an hour is lovely. ❤