January 4th, 2014 at 06:54pm
This is absolutely amazing!
I love how you've created your own concept from the lyrics, so kudos to you for that!
The layout and banner is also very good - it doesn't distract you from the content which is a good thing!
King For A Day is one of my favourite songs, so I love this even more so :D
Excellent job, definitely recommending this!
On the other hand, the flow wasn't really that good. The way that the sentences were structured disrupted the flow of the story, in my opinion. You could ask a beta reader for some help if you want.
This drabble was great though! I really liked the idea - basically, the whole thing. Good job with this, by the way.