Scars - Comments

@ swell
Yeah, it's honestly not that great and I know it. xD It's just something I tossed together because it was stuck in my head and wouldn't leave. It happens with me. xD But thanks for the comment and thanks for reading.

I did want the relationships to start strong and then be pushed into all chaos and in the end have everyone questioning what really happened. The story was bound to make people angry with me and I discussed that with my best friends yesterday haha.

I know right!? I was in the, "This is sexy but it also makes me feel bad because he looks like he's worried or something lskjflkjdgjklgf"

This was interesting. It seemed really disjointed in places, and I felt like you were packing a few storylines into one big story. Just to clarify: Mackenzie, Katie and Niall used to be best friends, but Kenzie is in love with Niall and Niall loves Katie who's not ready for a relationship but has cut herself. The story felt unfinished to me. While I understood how you wanted to end it, I didn't think it was very fitting. There's no easy to way to end this sort of story on a happy note, but I felt like things were unresolved, as the three's friendship started out strong at the beginning of the story, but by the end of it, everything has seemed ruined. One thing I did like though was that Liam was this innocent bystander out of all of this, like he's the clueless guy on the side while Niall is sorting out his issues. Also, that gif of Niall is just