One in a Million - Comments

  • moshi_

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    Just read everything. Hope you update soon! Can't wait until she and Eric see each other :)
    February 19th, 2014 at 12:38am
  • xohunnyxo

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    I love this story! Can't wait for more :)
    December 1st, 2013 at 05:22pm
  • ladyblackhawk

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    Love this!!!!
    November 20th, 2013 at 06:05am
  • Jayess

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    You set scenes very well and I like how you're showing and not telling.
    September 4th, 2013 at 04:30am
  • Thatmom

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    You've got me hook, line, and sinker!!! I have loved some of your other work and loved it!!! Please keep writing this:)
    September 2nd, 2013 at 01:42am
  • jazter

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    I don't really know what to make of this, I don't mean that in a bad way at all, just that there isn't enough of it for me to get a sense of how it's going to go. I can take some guesses but they'd probably be wildly inaccurate. It has a lot of potential if only because the scene in the prolog is a whopping 10 plus years ago and lord knows I changed a whole lot between my teen years and my mid to late twenties. Lot of potential, lot of potential for drama, too, I will be interested in where you're taking this.
    July 28th, 2013 at 06:16am