One in a Million - Comments

Just read everything. Hope you update soon! Can't wait until she and Eric see each other :)

I love this story! Can't wait for more :)

Love this!!!!

You set scenes very well and I like how you're showing and not telling.

You've got me hook, line, and sinker!!! I have loved some of your other work and loved it!!! Please keep writing this:)

I don't really know what to make of this, I don't mean that in a bad way at all, just that there isn't enough of it for me to get a sense of how it's going to go. I can take some guesses but they'd probably be wildly inaccurate. It has a lot of potential if only because the scene in the prolog is a whopping 10 plus years ago and lord knows I changed a whole lot between my teen years and my mid to late twenties. Lot of potential, lot of potential for drama, too, I will be interested in where you're taking this.