Generation Why Bother - Comments

Ahoy! Comment swap sent me here! And I have to tell you how much I really really love this! It reminds me so much of me and my friends! What with the pop pound and comic books. Oshie seems so sweet and his father is ADORABLE! I love Tegan and I'm personally not a lesbian but as a feminist, I love that she's a strong sassy lady.
But anyways, your writing is really amazing! I like that you put in subtle details about their personality or looks, instead of giving a paragraph to explain everything about Tegan for example. Also I like that it's ambiguous . What's gonna happen?! I don't usually read the whole thing when I read for a comment swap but this one I actually will! Recommended!!

I can't believe the next chapter will be the last! You have done an amazing job with this story and I hope more people stumble upon it like I did. I look forward to the final chapter, though I wish it didn't have to end :)

I can't believe the next chapter will be the last! You have done an amazing job with this story and I hope more people stumble upon it like I did. I look forward to the final chapter, though I wish it didn't have to end :)

Argh! It is getting so intense!!! Their time is finally here and I can't wait to know what happens! Oh my goodness. Also- ew... That bug seems nasty :) great job on the past few chapters! Update soon! :D

So I am an avid reader of this story and I'm sorry for being so quiet about it. I just want to let you know that I crave your updates. This story is phenomenal and I can't wait for more!!! No Andy! I hope he can fly!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

After only reading the first chapter, I'm really impressed! As someone who usually doesn't like random findings online, this was an absolute gem. Love the flowing, slightly satirical writing style and character formation. If I could request one thing, it would be a little bit more sarcasm, but then against I like the real-world conversation style and banter between characters. Easily a solid 8.5 out of 10. Keep it up!

So I found this to be a really interesting concept, it flows decently and the characters are well formed, but, I had some issue with the ramblings at the beginnings of the chapters. Don't get me wrong, it's cool that you threw in some inspiration for Oshie, but I really couldn't read the whole chapters after a while, I just started skimming them. Your grammar and spelling is good, same with sentence structure, but again, the ramblings kind of bothered me. Other than that, it's a great story and I hope you keep up the good work.

I am in love with this story. Every detail is excellent! KEEP UPDATING :D

I’m sorry. I couldn’t manage to finish the first chapter. I’m one of those hypercritical readers who judge a book without having even seen the cover, so that means I’m your target audience. Why did you keep interrupting the story by giving completely unnecessary info and background info? This is the second I’ve read today, which has this problem. Try controlling yourself when writing. Writers tend to forget what they’re doing, and start saying what they themselves are interested in rather than what the readers want to read.

I adore.your reference to Johnny Cool. The comical personality of Andy is amazing! I cannot wait to read more of this!!! Maybe you should switch to Tegan's POV. I don't know,just a suggestion... :P. Anyways stick with this, it's amazing!!!

Holy banana splits, I love this story its so cool and I cant wait to read more!!

Ohmygosh.
I don't think I've ever found a story like this. It is truly glorious and ingenious. You are wonderful.

I love how much you make the characters come to life. They are all different and unique and so indescribable. By the way, did you draw those cartoons? They are fantastic!

Okay, sorry for the ramble. KEEP GOING and update soon! This story is beautiful!

Okay first off I wanna say that I had to check if this was a fan-fiction at first because you made Put 'em Up sound like a real group. Which is impressive. And everything flows together so smoothly, which is something I find tough to do. I'm definitely recommending this and subscribing because holy cheese. Hope there's an update or two soon. (Also Oshie's probably the best name ever, js.)

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You are such a good writer. Everything about this story I adore, I just can't even... I can't. Your layout portrays the comicality of it all, but like the layout, the story has a deeper, underlying tone to it all and I absolutely adore that. I have fallen in love with your characters and it's only the second chapter, wow, that is a sign of a true, natural writer :) Your title is oh-so admirable and I really do wish I had your talent! You end your chapters and start the next ones in such a respectable, smooth, thought-out fashion which makes the reader hungry for more. I cannot wait to see where this goes!!

If you ever wanted to read an original story, I wrote one called "Quiescence", I would love you forever if you reviewed it ;D Only if you want to of course!

I recommended your story, obviously ;D

God Bless!!

xoxo

OliviaLaurence

Okay there is seriously something with you and story endings because I dig the last sentence and the one in the chapter before this. AND YOU MANAGED TO ANSWER LIKE .5 OF ONE OF MY QUESTIONS. And... I don't know how to make this comment have as much substance as the one below, so I'm just gonna hit submit. But do know that I am pretty much in love with this story and Oshie and Tegan. <3

Girrrl if you make a Wasting Time reference anywhere in this I swear I will love you forever because that song gives me such good vibes okay.

...anyway, moving on, I'm so stoked for this story. I saw the title and I was like duuuude so I clicked because that's what you do when you see rad stories, and then I got this lil treat, and I'm in love with the way you write. I want to know the rest of how everything went down and how Tegan and Oshie get struck by lightning and more importantly what happens after that. And I want to say you best get writing while running the risk of sounding like a twat but honestly I need to know more.

I was searching through the original fiction stories, and I found your story. I really like the first chapter and I think that your characters are interesting. I hope that you write more, because I really want to see what kind of special abilities Tegan and Oshie get.