The Unforgettable - Comments

Keep it going! I wanna know what happens!

@ Emsyj19
Haha! Always trust your gut! And let's just hope Gianna makes it out alive because so far, she's just digging deeper and deeper.

I THOUGHT HE WAS TOO NICE! That is all I can say xD I hope Gianna just goes it alone after all this.

@ Emsyj191
Nice! I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story! And Carlo, he's showing his true colors more and more, just wait a couple more chapters in. Chris, well he's in his own little world. Gianna, Gianna needs to rest and prioritize some things lol. By the way, I just updated like 10 minutes ago, short chapter nothing special. Look out for the one after though!

I've just got up to speed with the story :) I still find your approach to the story refreshing. Nothing is black and white, it's definitely a grey area which you're exploring through Giana, Carlo and Chris. I kind of found Carlo a little cringey in the last few chapters (the ring was way too much from him, espec since she's still married! Carlo, what were you thinking?). And even though Chris fucked up again, part of me wonders whether Giana is just escaping him for now and once she's healed, will go and give things another go with him. If she does, I hope he's learnt his lesson!
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Ooh, it's all so confusing for her. I love that it's not a clear cut decision. I thought she was definitely going to kiss Chris in the bathroom. Can't wait to read what happens next :)

Ahhh you making me doubt who I think she should be with now! What if she wants to be with Chris? I mean I wouldn't but the way you have her viewing things it's confusing which is relate able anyone would be wanting. Chris has done nothing to deserve forgiveness.

Dear god I just want her to file the paperwork already XD She clearly doesn't want Chris anymore after all the cheating he had done behind her back regardless of him admitting it to her. Carlo is seriously the cutest and romantic I would even fall for him honestly plus being half Italian flirting is always best with an accent and coffee :) But there is something about him that makes me wonder. Anyways as always I enjoyed this chapter :D You're going a great job!!!

@ Fontaine.
I'm glad you like the story so far! Yeah Gianna can be loud at times, but she's all heart, she doesn't know what all she wants yet, just wants to be loved. And Chris is getting a bit beside himself, I would've beat him up some more then left him too. But Carlo, watch out for that guy.

@ Emsyj19
Hi! I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the story so far! I'm sorry you've been cheated on, that's not cool. But yeah Gianna's all over the place she'll get her head straight soon... Hopefully! And yes Carlo is a babe, stepping all over Chris's game.

This story is very well written first off I must say this story feels real almost too real. I love that you are showing personal sides to all of the characters that are presented so far. Gianna who has done nothing wrong though it seems she holds back on wanting to say the D word in the marriage. Personally if it was me in her situation I wouldn't even stay. Like how the hell does Chris think it's just something to get over and of course therapy is just going to change that he cheated on her erm excuse me? no get out. Carlo seems handsome and romantic, he wants to help and seems like he reads into everything. I don't know how I feel about him yet but I like him so far. I will continue to see what happens next :D

Yes, you go Gianna.. Wait.. No.. No Gianna no. What if by chosing Carlo.. What if she ruins their possible relationship? *flails*

Just started reading this, and I LOVE it. It has me so gripped. I've been cheated on, and the way Gianna feels is so relatable. I love that you've gone on the route of them being together still, but her being torn as what to do. I LOVE Carlo (who wouldn't, what a babe?!) and I cannot wait to read more, please write more soon! x

Oh jeeze. This newest development has me cringing all over the place. xD

@ Princess Ariel
Haha, yeah Chris is getting a bit rowdy he needs a nice butt kicking right about now. On the other note, Yay I'm happy you like it! :) I'll be updating again either tonight or tomorrow.

If Chris physically hurts her.. Im going to kick his butt.
I really like the story so far. A lot! In fact, I read it in about thirty minutes. xD

Is there no chapters yet?