The only reason it's fast paced right now is because I want to get a really good introduction of who the characters are and their temperaments and personalities before it takes up the first 10 chapters of my story. If I cram in the introduction of the important ones together maybe it won't take as long. If you have any other suggestions please let me know! I'm more than open to criticism.~
July 16th, 2013 at 01:05am
It would be really good though if you could slow down the pace of things. Let the story flow. But I actually read all of the character bios and I can't wait for their development!