I really like this piece. It conveys the guilt and hopelessness wonderfully and I can clearly see this happening. Good job 
July 26th, 2013 at 12:21pm
At first I was angry about the quote in the summary, but I understood what was going on when I read through the whole thing. I like this. I like the tone, I can feel his guilt. I can also feel how much he wants to stay with the other woman, but also with his wife and family. I feel bad for him because he seems so conflicted, like he doesn't know what to do. It makes me really sad actually, so I think you did a really good job because you made me feel a strong emotion. It kind of feels hopeless.
Thanks for entering my contest! c: