Not Something to Be Proud Of. - Comments

I tots agree with you on the Hetero is gross, but Alex does not deserve someone as amazing as Jack.

In my opinion He should dump Alex's sorry ass till he learns his lesson but it's your story not mine...

This was brilliant! It had everything a good one-shot needs to succeed. You have depth, emotion, sex appeal, I could go on forever. Excellent job. Poor Jack! Alex is such a whore, but Jack is honestly such a perfect character for this. You have done an amazing job at showing his thoughts and making this so realistic. Once again, Great job! :)

The poor Bree girl too! Aww, honey. It's okay...

@ brickbyboringbrick12
Aww. Thank you! That means so much! I was sad because I thought no one would read this. But.. aww. Thank you! :)) Alex was a cunt in this story. idek. HAHA!

THIS WAS AMAZING, SAD, BUT STILL AMAZING. I'm tearing up, poor Jacky. :( but I still loved it! Your writing is amazing-<3 xx