Ooh I like this idea! I have not seen anything like this here on Mibba, you know where someone has created someone for them selves, so I really like that idea. The layout is not easy to read, sorry to be blunt, but grey writing on a black background is very challenging to read, it hurts the readers eyes, so I suggest fiddling around with your layout until you find a nicer colour scheme. But the banner is nice. I like the way you have added the extra POV in there, it was a nice touch. I think that this story has definite potential, I can't wait to see where it goes. Best of luck with this one girls, good job so far. 
August 7th, 2013 at 08:30pm