Tough Love - Comments

Ok, so I had to read the previous chapter so I could remember exactly what had happened because it's been awhile since I've read this but I remember everything now. This chapter was very good, filled with some sexy time and some drama and I like both of those very much.

I'm glad that both of them are starting to accept the fact that they are going to be parents. I was still reeling through the entire pregnancy until about a month or so before she was supposed to be born. Uh oh, I wonder how the parents will take it. It seems Matt and Amy accept it which is very good and I'm sure everyone else will too. Here comes the morning sickness. Poor Katie :(

Mmm and here comes the horniness ;) I love how she woke him up hehehe. Very hot sex scene as always. Oh how I wish that was me...I guess that's what my imagination is for ;)

Aww, poor Brian is nervous. Get ready to make a run for it Bri! Lol just kidding. Damn! They already know, that's an interesting twist.

“Well,” Brian started, “I’d like to think that you would feel like you could give me the courtesy of letting me know whether or not I need to start running at this point in time,” he said completely seriously. My dad stared him down for about two seconds before busting into a laugh.

Haha, I laughed at this.

I'm glad they're ok with it and aren't mad, I'm kind of surprised but also glad. I can see why they considered him family since he is Jimmy's best friend after all and he has been around all the time.

It's good that everything is accepting of the situation, even Papa Gates despite being skeptical at first. I'm sure they'll make great parents.

“What the fuck are you idiots congregating about over here?” Matt said into the mic with a smirk.

“Johnny shit himself,” Zack laughed as he answered through my mic.

Lol, I could totally see them saying this at an actual show. Love it!

“I’m seriously considering just taking you home so I can fuck the shit out of you right now,” I growled and she smiled mischievously. “Fuck Baby, you’re the sexiest fucking thing I’ve ever seen.”

“In that case, I give you permission to take full advantage of this body while you can. It’s not going to look like this for that much longer,” she smirked and bit her lip.

“Keep teasing me and see what happens to you. I’m so fucking turned on right now from seeing you like this and knowing that I’m the only one that can have you at the end of the night.”

“Yeah?” She asked seductively and I felt my dick twitch. “Does it turn you on that there’s a few guys in there that want to fuck me and yet the only one that I want to be fucked by is you?”

“There’s more than a few Baby, I can guaran-damn-tee you that.”

“Calm yourself down Haner, we’re out in public. You wouldn’t want to embarrass yourself now, would you?” She questioned.

“What you’re asking is almost impossible,” I moaned as she brushed her lips against my neck.

“If you behave yourself maybe I’ll help you out,” she smirked and I nodded. “Good,” she smiled and our lips met again. My body jolted as her hand gently rubbed against the bulge in the front of my jeans. “Down boy,” she whispered into my ear before kissing me on the cheek and walking around to the other side of the car.

“Fucking Bitch,” I mumbled under my breath as she laughed and got into the car. I knew then that this was going to be a long night.

Mm, way to have me going. So fucking hot! You're going to get it later Katie.

Oh my god! Sex in an office inside of a club! Holy fuck!

“Mmm, this could get kinky,” she smirked. “What’s wrong Baby, did I make you mad?”

“Oh, you have no idea,” I teased.

“So what’s your plan? Are you going to bend me over the desk and spank me for being such a bad girl?” She bit her lip again and something inside of me snapped.

“You know what? That’s not a bad suggestion,” I told her as I bent her over the desk and pulled up her skimpy dress exposing her ass that was pretty much bare courtesy of her tiny thong. I lightly slapped her butt cheek and she let out a little moan.

“Come on Baby,” she said as she wiggled her ass. “Spank me like you mean it.”

I knew the hormones from the pregnancy were making her horny as fuck, but this was a completely different side of her than I had ever seen before. Maybe it was just her arousal talking or maybe it was because we had gotten so comfortable in our relationship, but either way I was happy to comply and experiment with her. She let out another moan and I gently rubbed her smooth skin before pulling my hand back and spanking her firmly.

“Ah fuck,” she cried out in pleasure.

“You like that Baby,” I asked softly and she nodded. “You want another?” I questioned and she nodded as she wiggled her ass again. I spanked her again on the other cheek and she cried out again.

“Shit Baby, this is making me so wet,” she moaned.

I hooked my finger into her thong and quickly pulled it down over her ass and let it fall to her ankles. I ran my hand up the inside of one of her thighs before moving it to her sex and running my fingers along her slick, wet opening. She was so wet it was unbelievable. I pushed two of my fingers into her and she shoved back against my hand with a moan. I quickly unhooked my belt and pulled my jeans and boxers down as I moved directly behind her. I pulled my fingers from her and stroked my length, coating myself in her fluids as I rubbed my tip against her entrance.

“Fuck me Baby, you know you want it,” she teased.

I just, I can't right now! Not only are they in an office inside a club, but you add spanking in there too! Holy fuck, shit just got kinky and I'm loving it! Now you've really got me going. I'm going to have to take care of myself now thanks to this. I just might have to punish you for doing this to me! Lol. Fuck, that was hot smut scene, hottest one yet, well after the sex scene in my story because that one was beyond hot and kinky. I love your dirty mind so much, like you have no idea.

Oh damn. Cocaine, seriously Brian? Smh. You need to get your act together, you have a child coming and you can't be doing that. You really fucked up.

Oh shiznets! The police have been called! RUN BITCHES, RUN! SCRAMBLE! SCRAM! LOL.

Uh oh, it looks like Katie has commitment issues. Well, things have just gotten worse now.

Aww yay, I'm glad they made up. You both made a mistake, you just got to apologize, forgive and move on.

Anyways, this was really great. I'm sorry this comment is shitty. I'm just feeling bleck at the moment I guess but I wanted to get this done. Update soon! After my story first hehe.

Damnit brian!!!! I glad him and Kate can talk things through! I want nothing more than those two to be happy. I mean they deserve it

jesus christ that last part got me butterflies everywhere!!
my stomach went crazy.. I'm not even sure they were butterflies; it was more like freaking eagles or some shit ahaha
god, I just love the way you write so much. I don't even know what to say anymore. Loved the chapter really :') ohh and when katie's mom mentioned jimmy, it brought tears to my eyes... and I just got to think about matt's son (in real life) and how happy jimmy would be if he were alive...

HOLY CRAP WOMAN! I don't even know where to start!!! I guess with THANKS!!!

OK, I NEED TO STOP HYPERVENTILATING LOL

I'm really glad you liked the bar idea. I definitely felt like since the relationship is between Jimmy's best friend and little sister that I needed to incorporate some sort of tribute to him and I already had the idea of Katie owning a bar so it worked out well.

YES! The amount and intensity of smuttiness will continue to increase as the story goes on! I mean, now that they're officially together and they're not on a tour bus with a minimum of four other people at all times there HAS to be more sex, right? RIGHT!

I threw the fight in there for a few reasons, first being that yes, every relationship needs drama. Let's face it, there's no such thing as a perfect relationship. Secondly, I was setting up for the whole unplanned/unexpected pregnancy. Katie pretty much started shit for no reason other than she was tired and in a shitty mood. OF COURSE she had to take it out on him LOL

Poor Katie was petrified when she found out she was pregnant. Granted they are in their mid-late 20's she wasn't ready for it and Brian DEFFINITELY wasn't ready for it. I can't imagine having to go through that as a teenager, it must have been really stressful.

When she finally told him she was pregnant, I think she was just at a loss for words and knew that his reaction was going to be anything but a happy one. She had a million things running through her mind and it just kind of came out in the form of word vomit.

Brian definitely freaked out. It had only been a few months since they started dating and he was whoring himself out for years before this relationship. He didn't even consider the possibility of ever having kids until he got with Katie and it's all just coming at him too fast for him to comprehend right away.

They definitely needed to have time apart to think about what they wanted to do. Katie sitting there and staring at Brian all day probably would have just created more tension on both parts and she knew he had to clear his head to really think about things. Katie still wasn't 100% sure of what she wanted either and they both needed time to reflect and find their inner strength before they could know for sure.

I'm glad you liked the way I worked it with Brian taking some time before coming around. I wanted it to seem realistic and I tried to put myself in his position to write that part. He knew that as soon as he saw the ultrasound picture it was going to set in how real this was and that he had created another life with the woman he loved.

Going over to see Katie in the middle of the night was just something that he had to do. It's not like he would have been able to sleep anyway and he knew she wouldn't be able to either with all of the tension between them and stress of the unexpected pregnancy. Of course I had to make a little mushy scene in there too. He had reacted so harshly at first that I had to find a way to show that he really was sincere about going through with this. I'm so happy that you liked it and didn't think it was too cheesy

There's always a chance that you could have Matt's baby... you never know. Maybe there will be some chance meeting when you're both drunk and things could happen LOL

OMG I looked at your profile and saw the pics of your daughter. She is so freaking ADORABLE!! She has the cutest little smile!

Yes! Arin! I love Arin too and though I love Jimmy to pieces and miss him dearly I feel like so many people on here just ignore poor Arin. He's part of the band too!! AND HE'S SO FREAKING CUTE I CAN'T STAND IT! I could totally picture him being all shy about playing with the guys, and in an interview Syn was talking about how skeptical they were of him until he actually started playing. I just love him! I want to squeeze him!

Hahahaha! Katie had to get Brian riled up one way or another! That's just what she does, it's in her nature. Of course I had to pick on Johnny too because it's just too fun to not.

I know, I'm evil But I will say that I'm currently working on the next chapter for this and though it doesn't start exactly where this one left off, there definitely aren't many clothes involved in the first few paragraphs

THANKS SO MUCH for the incredible comments/compliments! I don't know how my chapters got to be so long, when I first started writing fan fiction YEARS ago for another band I was lucky if my chapters ranged between 2000-3000 words. I guess my writing has just developed over time and I try to incorporate more detail to set the scenery and portray emotions and stuff. I try not to go over 8000 words, but I won't post anything less than 6000 because I'm actually trying to write a book right now too and one of the suggestions that I had come across was that you should try to keep your chapters all close to the same length. I'm a big fan of long chapters too so I try to write in lengths of what I like to read.

Thanks for all of the compliments on the smuttiness! My other stories have smut too, but Starting Over With A Second Chance definitely portrays a raw, animalistic side of Brian and the sequel Drowning In Our Own Debris does too and will continue to have some more! I know you're super busy and active all over the site, but I just had to throw that in for you LOL

You can ramble any time you'd like when it comes to my stories! I truly love to get feedback from my readers and I'm so ecstatic right now you don't even know. You just made my whole week!

Thanks again! I'm really hoping I didn't bore you with my ridiculously long comment back to you either!

OMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! BEST CHAPTER SO FAR! THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS I LOVE ABOUT IT SO LET'S GET STARTED SHALL WE?

First, I love how she just told him flat out that she was pregnant. I never would've been able to do that. If it were me, I would've been so nervous and it would probably take me forever to spit it out haha.

I knew he wasn't going to like it and of course I expected him to freak out. I understand his feelings though, when I found out I was pregnant I was so scared, I'm not even kidding. I cried so much when I was pregnant because I just didn't think I was parent material. I considered getting an abortion, even adoption because I was so scared and I had doubts about myself. Plus, the baby daddy is a big idiot and an asshole and he was definitely not the right perso to have a baby with. It was most definitely unplanned. I was so scared to tell him but I managed and he freaked out as well wanting to get an abortion but in the end I just couldn't do it.

I think time alone to think about it was a good idea and I'm glad that Brian decided to go to the beach. Aww, Brian actually was smiling when he saw the little boy and his father. That right there showed that some part of him was actually considering keeping the baby. So I loved that part too.

I like how you panned it out, and didn't rush him into finally changing his mind. He actually genuinely thought about it and then when he went to look at the ultrasound pictures and he just knew, he couldn't get rid of it.

Aww, he went all the way to her place at 2 in the morning just to tell her that's so darn cute! I'm glad Brian changed his mind. I think they'll be great parents. I wonder if the child will be a boy or a girl? Either way he or she will be so darn cute, I mean, it's Brian's son/daughter and he's drop dead gorgeous lol.

He placed his hands on my hips as he smiled up at me again and gently pushed my tank top up, exposing my stomach. I closed my eyes and bit down on my lip in attempt to avoid crying again as he placed a few soft kisses around my stomach.

“I’m sorry little one, it won’t take you long to figure out that your Daddy is far from being perfect,” he whispered against my skin and I smiled as the tears started to fall. I quickly wiped them away before stroking Brian’s cheek with my thumb.

“He’s the perfect one for Mommy though,” I whispered with a smirk and he smiled up at me before I leaned down to kiss him again. I straddled his legs as I sat on his lap and then pulled back from the kiss and yawned again as he let out a small laugh.

“Mommy needs to get some sleep,” he said softly with a small smile and kissed me on the cheek.

This part right here was too cute and sweet, I literally was like awwww lol. I wish that I had gotten pregnant at a later age and with a better man who would do that with me, I would be smiling so much, I could just see it. That was my favorite part, loved it!!

“I want to be by your side through everything, and I’m going to need you by mine too,” he said quietly. I grinned and leaned up, pressing my lips to his.

I wish man would say that to me when I'm pregnant with his baby. I want to have Matt's baby but no he's married :( Sigh...

Aww, Chloe sounds cute. She makes me think of my daughter Abrianna who is such a cutie as well <3 My daughter is actually about her age, she's almost 11 months old and I love her to pieces.

“Cute kid,” he commented with a smile.

“This would be Chloe, the light of my life for the past nine months,” Amy grinned as she looked back at Chloe.

“Chloe, huh?” He smirked as he walked over and stroked the baby’s hair. “Well hello, Beautiful,” he said softly and she smiled up at him and started bouncing up and down again. “You have your mommy’s eyes, don’t you?” He questioned as he smiled back at Amy and she nodded.

“You want to hold her?” Amy asked.

“Sure,” he smiled as Amy handed him the baby and Chloe grinned and bounced around. “So much energy for such a tiny thing,” he smirked as he sat down on one of the stools at the breakfast bar.

Love this part too, they are already preparing themselves to be parents.

OMG!!! IT'S ARIN!!! I LOVE ARIN!!! It was really interesting reading about the audition. I bet that's exactly what happened during the audtions, Arin being all shy and talking about how he's a big fan and them all unsure at first. That seemed really realistic, loved that. Arin is such a cutie, I wanna squeeze him <3

I'm glad that Matt's cool about the whole thing. It should be interesting when they get around to telling their parents. I can't wait to find out how that goes down.


“Well Arin, it was a pretty unanimous decision that we all hated you,” Matt told him and he looked like a deer in headlights.

Lol I loved this. Matt you meanie lol.

“That’s great. Now all we need to do is tell our parents.”

“I know, I can’t wait to look your dad in the face and tell him I knocked you up,” I said sarcastically.

“It could be worse,” she laughed, “I could have ended up with Johnny instead. At least you can outrun him.”

“Thanks Babe. I’m glad you picked me over Johnny not for who I am, but for the fact that I can run faster than him,” I joked.

“That and you’re a better lay,” she said completely seriously.

“What?!” I said as I quickly stepped back and she started laughing hysterically.

“Calm down, Bri. I’m just kidding,” she said as she continued to laugh and I let out the breath I had been holding in.

Katie, you are so mean haha. Loved his reaction, I bet it was priceless lol.

And of course you got to end it like that, you fucking tease. I hate you! Just kidding I love you, now update this now or else!

I really like this story and you're doing a good job with it and I look forward to reading more which is why I clicked the little subscribe button. I have a question though. How in the hell do you make all of your chapters so damn long lol. Some of me are long but all the chapters were pretty much the exact same length. How do you do it? lol.

Anyways, I think I've rambled on long enough. I think this is my longest comment like ever haha. I really loved this chapter and what can I say, I had a lot to say and I said it so I'm done now. Now I need to take a little break because sitting here staring at the screen for hours, trying to read your super long chapters has got me exhausted lol. Ok, I'm rambling now. I swear I'm leaving now.

Aww, so she's going to open up a bar in Jimmy's honor, that's so sweet :D I think they will have a very successful business once they fix it up and stuff.

YES! DOUBLE THE SMUT! I LIKE ME SOME SMUTTY GOODNESS ;) Plus I really like your smut, it's so awesome :D

Oh no! They got into a fight! Well there did need to be some drama in their relationship.

Yay! They made up! They are just so darn cute!

OH NO YOU DIDN'T MISTER, GIVING KATIE ATTITUDE, I SHOULD SLAP YOU. NOW YOU LOOK LIKE A COMPLETE FOOL. SHE WAS TOURING DUMBASS! LOL. Uh oh, this can't be good. I'm already having a bad feeling.

AHHH SHE'S PREGNANT!!! HOLY SHIT! Brian is not going to like this. I would be scared to tell him too. I know when I started having suspicions that I was pregnant I was scared to tell anyone and then when I was sure I was pregnant I was so scared to tell the dad. And of course you just end it right there you fucking tease! lol. Lucky for me, the next chapter is already up so I don't have to wait to see Brian's reaction. This is going to be interesting that's for sure. I wonder if th is will ruin their relationship, I hope not.

GAHHH I MUST FIND OUT! Off to read!

@ NeverWakeMeUp
You're welcome, I'm glad that you commented on my candy bowl so that I could get the chance to read your stuff. I honestly don't read much, unless I'm bored or don't have any motivation to write. Well, when I do comment they are not usually very long unless I really like the story and I have a lot to say lol. You are a great writer and you're chapters are just so good and long that I have so much to say haha. OH MY GOSH REALLY? YOU WOULD DO THAT? I WOULD LOVE YOU FOREVER! LOL. Mmm, Matt is such a sexy beast just mmmmm!!! Ok, I won't go there since I'm pretty sure you know what I'm getting at so yeah.

Well I'm glad you posted it because I really like it but I understand why you were reluctant. Yes, Brian is a huge perv but you gotta love him haha.

I wouldn't be able to resist at least touching it or smacking it, I mean come on, his ass is right in front of your face you gotta do something haha. Being the weird person that I am I would probably kiss it haha. Yes, he is very delicious indeed, I would definitely eat him up mmm ;)

I'm glad you put that part in there because it made me laugh and it totally fit in with the situation.

Hell yeah! Matt is too good for that bitch, I was seriously about to teleport in there and kill the bitch myself. Haha yep, never mess with a woman's underwear haha. Teasing is so fun but torture at the same time, well for the person being teased that is, for the teaser it's just fun haha.

Yeah I get you haha but there will be hot, steamy bondage sex in the future right? lol.

Yep, I kind of pictured Mr. Sullivan to be a smart man lol.

Once again you're welcome, thank you for being such an awesome writer lol :D Yay! That would make me very happy. A sexy, smutty Brian, Matt OC one shot would be awesome because Addicted to the Lips of an Angel was pure fucking genius! I'm not even kidding!

It might take me awhile to comment on all these stories since your chapters are so long lol but I'm not complaining. I need to start writing too and as I was reading your work I was getting that urge to write like I really want to write, it's just sitting down and doing it and staying focused lol. I'm still reading chapter 5, kind of multi tasking so expect that comment in a bit.

@ akmo4725

You're so sweet! Thanks for always letting me know that you're still reading and enjoying! I love getting feedback from my readers and it makes me happy when I know they are enjoying what I'm putting out. Hope to write more for this chapter again soon. Sorry it took me so long to reply, been hella busy over the past few weeks. Thanks again for commenting!

@ pekigirl

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad his reaction seemed realistic because that's definitely what I was hoping for! Of course he had to come around and be accepting of it, he and Katie are just too fun together to destroy! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you on this one! I've been super busy and focusing on writing when I have the spare time! You're the best! Thanks again!

@ Mrs. Shadows

WOW, I don't even know where to start right now I'm so excited! I just got done with my classes for the day and BOOM! You left me tons of AMAZING comments!

First off, THANK YOU! I'm so excited that you're taking the time to read my stories! Hmm.... I could definitely pair you with Mr. Shadows in the future to show my appreciation I can't believe how long some of your comments are! It's insane (but I like it)!

I'm so glad that you like the plot for this one. I was almost afraid to post it at first because I thought it would be too controversial and piss a lot of people off. Brian has always been a bit of a man-whore, at least up until this point

Of course Kate was going through Brian's phone and slapping his ass as he carried her back to the room. I mean, who wouldn't in that situation? He's just so delicious!

Writing Brian's masturbation was definitely an exciting adventure for me hehe. He was definitely using every bit of self control to not pounce on Katie when he had the chance. The thought of Johnny coming out of the shower with just a towel wrapped around his waist and Zack yelling at him just seemed to funny for me to not put in there! I can just picture him standing there half naked looking all befuddled LOL

I'm glad that Matt broke up with the bitch too. I hated that cunt! I had to write in some part where Katie was taking care of Brian because I felt like if she cared enough to be so brutally honest with him she wouldn't let him suffer alone either. She definitely got him good when she got him all hot and bothered just to leave him. At least she got her point across!

Yes! They finally officially got together on New Year's eve! I felt like with how long they had waited before they admitted their feelings to each other it would just be wrong if they had insane bondage sex right off the bat LOL. There will DEFINITELY be more smutty scenes in the future! She does have a little hood piercing, her thoughts were that it hurt like hell for about two seconds but it was less than a week before the pain went away

Mr. Sullivan definitely has an idea that Brian and Katie are up to something! He's a smart man!

Thanks so much for the reads and the comments! You're awesome and I'm so flattered that you're actually taking the time to read my work! I was totally serious about writing you in to one of my stories as well in the future. Not sure how, when, or which one (it may be another one shot or in a future fic) but I would totally do it!

Lol, their conversations are so amusing.

YES!!! WOHOOO!!!! IT IS OFFICIAL! BRIAN AND KATIE <3
THAT WAS TOO DARN CUTE!!! Brian confessing his love to her, her telling him she loved him too, their new years resolutions and then the sexy but sweet smut scene. I'm just overwhelmed by the cuteness of it all and how happy I am that they are finally together. Oh, she pierced her clit huh? Dirty girl, I love it! I think it's sexy looking but to actually do it must hurt like hell lol.

Smh, why would you guys lie to Mr. Sullivan. I bet he already knows haha.

I loved this chapter! It was so cute and sweet and just gahh! I can feel the love <3

I can understand why Katie doesn't really want to be interviewed but I'm glad she finally agreed. I hope she becomes an official member of the band because that would be pretty cool.

YES!!! WOOHOOO!!! MATT BROKE UP WITH THAT BITCH! THAT'S MY MAN HAHA. And he apologized to Katie too for being an asshole which is good. Aww, Katie and Brian's interview was nice, they are totally bonding <3

Aww, Brian is finally somewhat admitting his feelings. I can so tell that she feels the same way for him, she just hasn't totally let herself realize it yet. I hope they start something up after the tour, or before then hehe ;)

Oh no! Brian's sick, that's no good. That must've sucked and then he had to run offstage in the middle of the show. Damn people, give him some space! lol. I loved this, I laughed at it, not sure why. I laugh at random shit haha.

Nothing is worse than being violently sick, unless you’re violently sick and people are constantly asking you if you’re OK while you’re trying to concentrate on not dying.

Aww Kate stayed with him and took care of him just like he took care of her, talk about sweet <3

Kate you fucking tease! Just teasing poor Brian like that haha. Love it! Leave him with a raging hard on while they go do a sound check. That's what you get for messing with a girl's panties lol.

Haha, even Kate's parents can see that they obviously have a thing for each other and he has their blessing which is good. Brian really is a good guy and I think him and Kate will make a wonderful couple.

Another great chapter written by you. Love this story and love you as an author.

Chapter two, chapter two, what do I have to say about chapter two? I FUCKING LOVED IT!!! Damn, Katie got hella wasted and I loved how she just went through his phone and kept slapping his ass, I know I would be smacking it and squeezing it and just mph haha. Anyways, Brian was obviously struggling. He should have taken her right then but I understand why he didn't. He has changed and that is good. Aww, he has feelings for Katie, they are so cute together and Brian is such a sweetheart under the whole asshole facade he puts up. Mmm, Brian masterbation really had me going, I would have loved to help take care of him hehe ;)

Oh damn! Girl fight! haha. Beat her ass Katie! April got her ass beat good, that's what she gets for doing that little sneak attack. What a little bitch. My man should not be with no bitch, he needs to find someone better, like me perhaps lol.


"ALL OF YOU SHUT THE FUCK UP!” Zack yelled at the top of his lungs and we all looked at him, surprised at the fact that he actually yelled that loud. “Nobody is going to hit anybody! Brian, take Katie either to the bunks or to the back of the bus. Matt, worry about your girlfriend and get her cleaned the fuck up! Johnny, please go put some fucking pants on!”

Loved this, I laughed so hard, especially the ending. I could just see Johnny standing there in only a towel like what the fuck? haha. And Zacky yelling at him to go put on some damn pants.

Matt, why in the hell are you standing up for that bitch?! She is obviously a whore who only wants you for sex and money so leave the bitch before I'm forced to teleport into this story and kill her myself. lol.

Anyways, another amazingly long chapter that was super fantastic. I love your writing <3

Alright so here is story number 1. I just read the first chapter and first I must say, wow that was long haha. I love to read long chapters and I personally write long chapters myself so that was awesome. Now, onto the content. It made me sad thinking about Jimmy's passing because I miss him so much and he was such an amazing guy and drummer, best friend, brother, all that stuff but I do really like this plot. I think it's cool that Katie is Jimmy's younger sister and she gets to play drums with them, not that I have anything against Mike Portnoy either but I think that's cool. Of course Brian had to do the convincing. He could convince me to do anything, all he would have to do is ask and maybe fuck me and then I would say yes lol I know I'm dirty. Anyways, I'm glad she said yes.

Aww, I'm glad that everyone was accepting of her. I loved the banter between them onstage and just the banter in general it made me smile. Johnny should have pushed Brian offstage, that would be funny haha. All of the guys are such pervs. Brian is an asshole, sleeping with women and then just tossing them away, but I'm glad that Katie helped him to realize what an asshole he was. I don't know if it had to do with Jimmy's passing or if he's always been that way but I hope Katie can help change his ways. I really like her personality and I feel for her because of losing her brother and I feel for the guys as well.

Great first chapter. I'm off to read more and you will most likely be getting comment spams haha.

I think this was another really great chapter! the part where brian gets a little hard headed and he's afraid and confused and tells himself he doesn't want the baby.. but then he sees the kid and then he starts thinking better.. but then he doesn't want the kid again xD ahahah I think that's pretty realistic.. :) but I'm glad that in the end he came around :) awww and when he talked to her tummy.. how cute!
loved this chapter!

awesome!!! I am so glad Brian came around!!! I can not wait to see what happens next!! Update soon please!!

awesome!!! I am so glad Brian came around!!! I can not wait to see what happens next!! Update soon please!!

@ synystarr
Glad you're enjoying it, next chapter just posted!

@ akmo4725
New chapter just posted! We find out just how Brian feels!!

@ uniqueluver20
Glad you like it! Just updated!

Thank you all for you're wonderful comments!!

So glad for the update.

ahhhh omg!!! Im sure Brian will be scared, but I hope they don't break up over this and I hope he is there for KAtie and I hope he will be happy to have a kid with his soulmate!! update soon!