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  • xjadenxthornex

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    @mindmischief thank you! i've been working on stupid classes but i need to write the fun stuff again!
    October 3rd, 2013 at 12:51am
  • mindmischief

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    Yes, yes, yes! I need more!
    August 10th, 2013 at 05:37pm
  • xjadenxthornex

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    @ January Rose
    thank you for reading & leaving comments!
    August 7th, 2013 at 11:28pm
  • January Rose

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    I kind of figured. Why would Zac be engaged to an another person if he still had feelings for his ex-neighbour? But I do feel bad for her. To think that the boy she liked had *** with her the night before and to wake up and find out it was just dream? That's kind-of sad.
    Good update though and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
    August 7th, 2013 at 03:00am
  • January Rose

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    I just found this story and I’m loving it so far. I love how you wrote the Prologue because I felt like I was seeing the story through the eyes of child. Then in the first chapter she was much older. Good job on writing those 2 parts. Not everyone can pull that off.

    I’m already love all the characters. But I feel so bad for Cher since she really liked Zac and he is already happily married. But he should have told her. (Even if it is person-to-person news)

    I’m not particularly fond of the layout though. I think it would be cool to add pictures of the main characters, but it’s your story.

    Overall, awesome start and I look forward to reading more. Cute
    July 28th, 2013 at 12:47am
  • Evil.Red.Head

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    @ xjadenxthornex
    Agreed there :-)
    July 26th, 2013 at 02:27am
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    @ SaveMeFromMyself
    Thank you so much! Hanson fans gotta keep it tight!
    July 26th, 2013 at 01:14am
  • Evil.Red.Head

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    Glad to know I'm not the only Hanson fan around Mibba, awesome! Keep writing :-) I like the direction it's going.
    July 25th, 2013 at 09:58am