Falling Through Stars and Pain - Comments

  • Porcelain Heart

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    Hannah! I like that! It was smart of you to show what happened in chapter 2 through "Eponine's" eyes. Eponine. I so can't believe you named her that. Needless to say that provoked a serious giggle fit. Ooh! Maybe Eponine (giggle-giggle) should eventually have a conversation with her really girly gal-pal Maybelline (her mom LOVES make-up) Bostitch about how she's probably falling for her gay best friend. "Ooooooooooo-M-frickin'-G! You... You're like, hot for a guy who's not even into girls in general! That's sad Eponine, really sad."
    August 2nd, 2008 at 02:54am
  • Porcelain Heart

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    Any ideas? I'm stuck....
    July 31st, 2008 at 05:06pm
  • Porcelain Heart

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    I need name suggestions... For the boy it's either Emerson or Tristan. Pick one of those. But I really have no clue what to name her. (Jazz is just a nickname)
    May 14th, 2008 at 06:17pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    This is really good. But the chapters are a bit short and also at the beginning of your chapters maybe put whos POV it is to save confusion.
    May 14th, 2008 at 02:38pm
  • Burn My Blood

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    I like it. I really do. Great Job!
    May 12th, 2008 at 04:04pm
  • Sailor Meranda

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    Hanners, I like it so far. I can't wait to see where your going with it, lol.
    May 10th, 2008 at 11:20pm
  • xFar-From-Lonelyx

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    This is very good so far. i have never heard of this concept before :]
    Subscribing
    May 9th, 2008 at 07:21am
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    Clap good so far. *subscribes*
    May 9th, 2008 at 06:21am