Falling Through Stars and Pain - Comments

Hannah! I like that! It was smart of you to show what happened in chapter 2 through "Eponine's" eyes. Eponine. I so can't believe you named her that. Needless to say that provoked a serious giggle fit. Ooh! Maybe Eponine (giggle-giggle) should eventually have a conversation with her really girly gal-pal Maybelline (her mom LOVES make-up) Bostitch about how she's probably falling for her gay best friend. "Ooooooooooo-M-frickin'-G! You... You're like, hot for a guy who's not even into girls in general! That's sad Eponine, really sad."

Any ideas? I'm stuck....

I need name suggestions... For the boy it's either Emerson or Tristan. Pick one of those. But I really have no clue what to name her. (Jazz is just a nickname)

This is really good. But the chapters are a bit short and also at the beginning of your chapters maybe put whos POV it is to save confusion.

I like it. I really do. Great Job!

Hanners, I like it so far. I can't wait to see where your going with it, lol.

This is very good so far. i have never heard of this concept before :]
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good so far. *subscribes*