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  • DrWhofangirl

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    Cool. Love it. Can't wait for more!
    September 5th, 2014 at 07:54am
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    Before I even read the chapter itself, I just wanna say that I love the chapter titles! They are completely perfect for this story! Now onto the chapter!

    The description of the crime scene was soooo well done. I could picture it perfectly, just like I was seeing it through Gerard's eyes. And I love Gabe, he is precious in the best way possible. Actually, I just love all of the characters so far! I love how they've got similar characteristics to their counterparts in the Dexter universe but they're also completely themselves. It's wonderful.

    The Black Mamba reference made my day, by the way! I miss The Academy Is. :(

    Oh my lord, the more Gabe says Gerardy, the harder I laugh. That's actually one of, if not my favorite thing about this story: the little attention paid to details like that. I can tell that you both care so much about this story and that's what I've missed; reading stuff that people are enjoying writing, rather than just doing it because they feel obliged to. I don't know if that makes sense but I love it. (:

    Oh and Ryan Ross as the lawyer? Perfect. Absolutely perfect. I really hope he comes back because reading the interaction between him and Brendon was absolutely marvelous. :D

    So as you can probably tell, I love this story. I really, really do and I cannot wait to see the next chapter! And thank you so, so much for the shoutout; it really, really made my day! Love you Lizzy! <3
    September 12th, 2013 at 04:10am
  • You'reJustASadSong

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    Can I just say, this is written wonderfully and in attentive detail.

    So far, I love the story and absolutely adore the characters. And Frank and Gerard - It's definitely the start of something perfect. Well, not perfect given the situation, but like, really cute and super hot.

    This is brill. Please, please update soon. =D
    September 12th, 2013 at 01:22am
  • lizzicleromance

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    @ fun ghoul fez.
    My heart literally skipped several beats when I saw you had commented this!!! It's like coming home, like the old days, when we would comment each other's stories religiously. I MISS THOSE DAYS SO VERY MUCH!!! Thank you for taking the trip down memory lane to come and see the new story, I am so grateful that you did. Def don't be a stranger either, I have missed you so much!!!! <333
    September 7th, 2013 at 03:58am
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    So, as I already mentioned to Lizzy, I haven't read anything on here in literally years, let alone commented on something. But as soon as she told me about this, I couldn't pass it up and jesus, am I glad that I didn't. I absolutely LOVE this so far. Both of you are writing so, so well and I love the crossover that's going on. And I think my favorite part is that Mikey is the Deb character of the story; my favorite MCR man and my favorite Dexter character, combined! It's heaven!
    Anyways, you are both doing a magnificent job on this and I cannot wait for the next update. (:
    September 7th, 2013 at 02:53am
  • lizzicleromance

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    May I just say, I am incredibly honored that you chose to help me co-write this. I have waited a long time for your lovely writing skills to return... and they finally have, yay!!!
    August 13th, 2013 at 09:40am
  • jon walker

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    YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!! Very Happy
    July 27th, 2013 at 02:39am
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    I really like this because it combines two of my favorite things: Dexter and MCR. Oh and the writing is really good too. Update soon!
    July 26th, 2013 at 11:54am