Before I even read the chapter itself, I just wanna say that I love the chapter titles! They are completely perfect for this story! Now onto the chapter!
The description of the crime scene was soooo well done. I could picture it perfectly, just like I was seeing it through Gerard's eyes. And I love Gabe, he is precious in the best way possible. Actually, I just love all of the characters so far! I love how they've got similar characteristics to their counterparts in the Dexter universe but they're also completely themselves. It's wonderful.
The Black Mamba reference made my day, by the way! I miss The Academy Is. :(
Oh my lord, the more Gabe says Gerardy, the harder I laugh. That's actually one of, if not my favorite thing about this story: the little attention paid to details like that. I can tell that you both care so much about this story and that's what I've missed; reading stuff that people are enjoying writing, rather than just doing it because they feel obliged to. I don't know if that makes sense but I love it. (:
Oh and Ryan Ross as the lawyer? Perfect. Absolutely perfect. I really hope he comes back because reading the interaction between him and Brendon was absolutely marvelous. :D
So as you can probably tell, I love this story. I really, really do and I cannot wait to see the next chapter! And thank you so, so much for the shoutout; it really, really made my day! Love you Lizzy! <3
Can I just say, this is written wonderfully and in attentive detail.
So far, I love the story and absolutely adore the characters. And Frank and Gerard - It's definitely the start of something perfect. Well, not perfect given the situation, but like, really cute and super hot.
@ fun ghoul fez. My heart literally skipped several beats when I saw you had commented this!!! It's like coming home, like the old days, when we would comment each other's stories religiously. I MISS THOSE DAYS SO VERY MUCH!!! Thank you for taking the trip down memory lane to come and see the new story, I am so grateful that you did. Def don't be a stranger either, I have missed you so much!!!! <333
So, as I already mentioned to Lizzy, I haven't read anything on here in literally years, let alone commented on something. But as soon as she told me about this, I couldn't pass it up and jesus, am I glad that I didn't. I absolutely LOVE this so far. Both of you are writing so, so well and I love the crossover that's going on. And I think my favorite part is that Mikey is the Deb character of the story; my favorite MCR man and my favorite Dexter character, combined! It's heaven! Anyways, you are both doing a magnificent job on this and I cannot wait for the next update. (:
May I just say, I am incredibly honored that you chose to help me co-write this. I have waited a long time for your lovely writing skills to return... and they finally have, yay!!!