Uncontained - Comments

Happy birthday to the author of the best Pokemon story ever ! I'm thrilled that Uncontained is still active. I feel like you've captured the perfect blend of the Pokemon storyline and reality. Malachi and Beau make the cutest (possible) couple ever ! Summer is such a little munchkin, I want her to make me a flower necklace too

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oh my goodness, a pokemon story. i was looking everywhere for a good read and i have finally found one. though i haven't watched pokemon or played it in ages (though i'm going to be picking it back up in a little keke) this was a phenomenal read.

i really like the summary and how the main character actually doesn't like pokemon but the first chapter where the adventure begins like i remember it to begin when watching the series is just...i really like this. i hope you continue it with all that you got.

Aw shucks. It's no problem. I really like the story.

Um I think it is just not many people are into pokemon because I had a couple pokemon stories up and there wasn't a lot of feedback.

I like the idea of interviewing the characters. That is a neat concept.
I would like to ask a couple questions.
Beau: Do you ever want to find out who your dad is or do you hate him so much that you don't care?
Florence: Who is your favorite to hang out with?
Czeslaw: How is it that you know exactly where to go? And how did you learn water gun so quickly?
Issac: What is your favorite move that you can do?
Uriah: What did your old trainer do to you to make you so ticked off?

I really like this story. I played Pokemon Yellow and I like how you are making it come to life. Can't wait for more.

I'm in love with this story. It's such a unique approach on Pokemon Yellow but it works ! Florence is a little crybaby but so damn cute. I can't wait for the next update !!

I like it! Pulls you in and keeps you moving. I wil be reading the rest of the chapters through out the next couple if days! Good stuff.

I love this story

A very unique twist on pokemon yellow. I can't wait for the next update.

Wow, this is really good. I cannot wait to read more. :D