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  • Alice Verney

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    Holy crap
    October 26th, 2013 at 05:01pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Lol the chapter wasn't THAT bad (I mean in term of sexual stuff).
    Will is such an asshole. I understand he "loves" Grace but damn. Being drunk is NEVER an excuse and she was SO down
    September 28th, 2013 at 06:36am
  • bxgurl95

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    Hehe can't wait to see what happens next!
    September 26th, 2013 at 02:36am
  • SunMoon123

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    I can't wait to see what happens next! Love this story! Update!
    September 22nd, 2013 at 05:08pm
  • beautiful creature

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    <3.....@bxgurl95 your right he is just worried about popularity
    September 15th, 2013 at 08:23pm
  • bxgurl95

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    He did know who it was but he was "waiting for it forever" o.0
    William needs to not have been such a brat. He's not a bad looking guy on assuming and all he's worried about is popularity.
    Great chapter though :)
    September 15th, 2013 at 07:25pm
  • Cupcake Princess

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    Your doing a really good job on this story I think it's going a little slow but it's the style of writing anyway love it!!!
    September 3rd, 2013 at 08:37pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    cute!!!
    August 27th, 2013 at 08:38am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    I love his relationship with Emma, it's absolutely adorable!
    August 7th, 2013 at 11:43pm
  • ImpulsiveWords

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    The freakin summary reeled me in!! Back in an hour or so... Reading
    August 6th, 2013 at 07:23am
  • SarahLovesMacMiller

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    Love this! Update? *.*
    August 6th, 2013 at 01:48am
  • Rikki101

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    I love this story! It was a really great idea to show Beau's life when he was alive. I think it kind of completes the Love is Dead story. Update! =)
    August 5th, 2013 at 07:42pm
  • Goddess of Floyd

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    I was fangirling so much on the third chapter!! ROUND AND ROUND IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE SONGS!! I was totally singing it in my head (well, if you must know, I was singing it out loud) Haha!

    Anyway, Imagine Dragons related stuff over, onto the actual story. So far, it's really good. I enjoyed reading it, and I'm really curious to see how this could all end in Beau committing suicide. He seems so happy at the moment, what all went wrong? Your style is pretty unique, with your sentences all being pretty short and to the point. I write in quite a similar way, so I find it easy to read. I really want to see how it turns out!

    And I'm absolutely thrilled with Beau's taste in music xD
    August 4th, 2013 at 07:40pm
  • Cynder

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    This is really good! Great job. :)
    August 4th, 2013 at 06:27am
  • Love_Bug!!!

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    Oh my god!!! This is amazing.
    August 4th, 2013 at 01:50am