Lol the chapter wasn't THAT bad (I mean in term of sexual stuff). Will is such an asshole. I understand he "loves" Grace but damn. Being drunk is NEVER an excuse and she was SO down
He did know who it was but he was "waiting for it forever" o.0 William needs to not have been such a brat. He's not a bad looking guy on assuming and all he's worried about is popularity. Great chapter though :)
I was fangirling so much on the third chapter!! ROUND AND ROUND IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE SONGS!! I was totally singing it in my head (well, if you must know, I was singing it out loud) Haha!
Anyway, Imagine Dragons related stuff over, onto the actual story. So far, it's really good. I enjoyed reading it, and I'm really curious to see how this could all end in Beau committing suicide. He seems so happy at the moment, what all went wrong? Your style is pretty unique, with your sentences all being pretty short and to the point. I write in quite a similar way, so I find it easy to read. I really want to see how it turns out!
And I'm absolutely thrilled with Beau's taste in music xD