August 6th, 2013 at 07:06pm
First off, I really love this layout.
Secondly, I've completely fallen in love with this story. The first part I can definitely relate to. You always get into a relationship and they say I love you first. You can't NOT say it back, so you do. Then time goes on and you break it off and you figure out you really do. I've been through that situation and I'm still sitting here in love with this person; so I can definitely relate to this story!
I can truly feel the heartbreak of the narrator as she sees him walk with another girl and how she doesn't hear from him for months on end. Not only did you describe it will, but I've been in that exact position. This story really, really hit home for me.
Usually I talk about some things the writer can fix here, but you have zero mistakes for this story. You have a beautiful, heartfelt piece and I'm SO happy I came across this amazing story. Thanks for a great read!
And you just have to get over it.
I think you illustrated that so well.