Probably Wouldn't Be This Way - Comments

  • Torigoesrawrr25

    Torigoesrawrr25 (100)

    United States
    Oh my goodness! This was so sad! You killed my favorite player! haha I loved the way you used this quote, it was so different. It's nice to read something other than the typical love story. The part where you had her talking to his grave made me cry. Ugh i love that and I think its one of the most touching things ever! I also really loved how you used a different name for your main character. The name Sutton is so rare and its so beautiful! This was so adorable and sad and touching and I just adored it! Thanks for entering! I'm still waiting on a few more submissions and then I'll post the winner!!
    August 2nd, 2013 at 10:24pm