Eyes of Temptation - Comments

  • whatevenarewords

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    Loving this story so much! I know it has been about a year since your last update but if you were going to start up again anytime soon now would be awesome haha!
    December 24th, 2016 at 02:06am
  • KittyKatManson

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    WHAAAAA best fan fic i've read in a while! update, please!
    March 26th, 2015 at 06:15am
  • LKBJA

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    This was so much different from before! You really are doing an amazing work! Keep it up <3
    March 10th, 2015 at 11:02am
  • lastamericangirl

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    Oooh my God! TWO updates! This was so sweet and playful and ugh. BOYFRIEND!? I can't. I can't you. You've killed me. You've really killed me.
    March 10th, 2015 at 04:58am
  • zeldachick14

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    They r destined to get caught! I can feel it!
    March 9th, 2015 at 07:15am
  • cmdiva

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    Yay an update! And early Billie Joe, yes please.
    March 9th, 2015 at 03:44am
  • zeldachick14

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    Yayyyyyyyyyyyyy! Updaaaaaaatttteeee! This is a great story keep it up bro!
    March 6th, 2015 at 06:31am
  • lastamericangirl

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    YOU UPDATED EEEEK. Looooooved it. And YES to the early Billie Joe story. Maybe reading it will get my ass in gear! Haha.
    March 6th, 2015 at 04:40am
  • zeldachick14

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    Keep them coming! I was sooooooo happy to see u updated, so keep up the good work! And i feel that there will be interesting elements in the story coming up! Wink
    November 23rd, 2014 at 05:19am
  • lastamericangirl

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    You updated, gahhhh! I loved it. I personally really like where it's going. This should be interesting. :)
    November 23rd, 2014 at 05:03am
  • Whatshername86

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    Such a great update, good to see your back! Update soon!
    July 21st, 2014 at 03:27pm
  • chelsea_dagger

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    Love this story! You're a fantastic writer, I can't wait for more Billie Joe and Delilah Very Happy
    July 15th, 2014 at 10:30am
  • lastamericangirl

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    Girlfriend, words cannot describe my happiness right now. I loved this update. Loved it.
    July 14th, 2014 at 05:51am
  • poison and blood

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    @ Crystal2
    I'll definitely try to come back as soon as I can! I'm putting more focus on my other story until I find inspiration again. xx
    February 9th, 2014 at 11:28pm
  • Crystal2

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    Just saw this- hope you get to update soon!
    February 9th, 2014 at 11:12pm
  • latina13

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    Please have mercy on my soul and update!
    Loved this chapter. especially the sex scene.Damn that was kinky ;))
    September 5th, 2013 at 10:25pm
  • NerdGlasses

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    JESUS! That was some serious.. fucking. Can't say I didn't like it though. I'd be crazy not to :P But I also like how conflicted she is about him. Adds some fight to her character. And makes me look forward to their next encounter :)
    September 4th, 2013 at 02:21pm
  • The Grouch

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    Nope don't like Logan - but that's only because Bj is the other man.. who could compare to him right? (except Mike). I'm so glad you put that dirty scene in there, not only was it absolutely filthy, it was so Billie Joe. I love this, and everything else you write, but damn you've gotten me excited for this :D xoxoxoxoxoxo
    September 4th, 2013 at 05:10am
  • zildjianrocker

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    Holy crap, P&b, that was indeed dirty. Loving this story. To answer your questions, no I don't like Logan and yes he is still an ass. He may have been nice to her in this chapter but it doesn't take away what a monumental douchebag he was in the last one. Clearly, Billie Joe is the way forward. I'm interested to see what his marital situation turns out to be because either he is not as happily married as she thinks he is, or he's just a really naughty boy in this story. Can't wait!
    September 4th, 2013 at 03:25am
  • Danny Sexbang

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    Hot damn. Happy face Now THAT was an exciting chapter.

    Update soon!
    September 3rd, 2013 at 11:53pm