October 30th, 2013 at 07:48am
first of all, the layout is so lovely and the girl's dress on the banner is so cute (I'd like that in my closet, haha.)
i really like the relationship between val and adelaide; it's so cute and innocent, but mildly depressing because of val mentioning dying. that's just...so unfair. we barely got to know his awesome character (i mean, just his description is absolutely adorable) and we're already made known of his fate. and that kissing part? hello. (; it was so cute and almost childlike; just so precious. i think the ending sentence -- Why did the dying boy have to kiss as though he had eternity in his hands? -- really brought the story home and made it real. i absolutely love this.
i do apologize that this comment is not up to par with the one that you gave me (which i really appreciate, thank you!), but it's getting a bit late and i need to sleep. anyways, this short story is so cute and beautiful and i really enjoyed reading it. definitely reccing it out. lovely job!.
This is for the "calaveritas de azucar" you requested form my candy bowl.
I love the layout, the image you chose as a banner, and the soft colors you chose to go with the story; it gives these at ease vibe that they both feel when they are together and I just find it beautiful when a layout as a whole ties in perfectly with a story.
The thing that I loved most about this is the character interactions and how the narrator, Adelaide, muses to herself in between them; that is what breaks my hear the most because you can actually tell that she has been avoiding these feelings, this situation, because of her fear of being hurt due to him being the "dying boy". I absolutely love that, the strong emotional connection between the two
and how that fear has kept her from expressing herself completely.
This reminded me so much of The Fault in Our Stars, by the way, so you got me crying again for your story, for Adelaide and Val, and for the book too