Disposable Teens - Comments

@ ManiggyWhore
I have been thinking on how to end it, since my goal is to complete it after 10 chapters. However, I am also working on 2 other fan fictions, "You, me, and the Baby makes 3!" and "All I Ever Wanted" have been my top priorities as well. It's very hard to update on the only computer in my whole house hold. I am trying my best though.

Thank You, very much for the compliments and support! Once I get back from Vacation, I should be able to update.

I reaLLy Love your story. <3 HopefuLLy you update soon.

@ glitterkitten
Haha thank you! I was wondering about that, thank you!

Oh my gosh! So glad you're back!! And, on a side note...Chris!!! I totally love you. Also he was in Nine Inch Nails until '97...

@ ManiggyWhore
We'll see. I think it's a wrong approach too, but I got to keep someone on Tim's side (john) since everyone else is upset at them at the moment.

@ TwiggyLeeManson
Yes, it's normal. I've been through it (the abuse) & so many of my friends. Like, I see so many people out there happy & smiling, but I believe they don't deserve it since they hurt others as well. Haha, I sound like a total ass & I'm sorry about that. As far as John & Tim's situation goes, I think Tim was a bit wrong about it. It's sweet that he tried to get John's attention & got somewhat what he wanted, but it's not really out of passion, now is it? I have mixed feelings about Tim's character here even though I greatly empathize what you're saying about him that he only wanted to impress John, so I really have no clue as to what could fix the situation. Maybe it could get worse? Their situation, I mean. Keep writing, you do it very well. (:

Also, I'm very sorry for the late replies. I haven't been logging onto Mibba recently.

@ TheCorpseGentleman
Thank you! So you got my reference!
I know.

PS--- Skold is AWFUL in the best way possible. <3

I'm a Black Butler fan! :)

@ ManiggyWhore
Thank you. I wanted to make Tim a character who is mysterious and suspicious. How he pops out of nowhere to tease John, and to flirt with Brian, making Jeordie jealous, and causing conflict between Kenny (his sort of teacher) and John (his classmate). It kind of felt a "bad boy" type of character needed attention to his side of the story. I wanted to mention, how Skold had a teenage mother, when he was born (similar to what I have read online about him), but Ill let that story come up later. If the reader(s) want to take John's side, thinking Tim was abused, and it's not entirely his fault, That would be an interesting argument if Tim is a horrible person or not. In other words, I don't particularly defend someone who hurts others, but being brought up in a household where there is constant abuse, could that person thought it was normal that others could feel similar to what he goes through? Also, could it be that he had feelings towards John, and he couldn't figure out how to control them? Even if the solution wasn't the best choice to win John over, and instead of hurting John, he wanted to impress him, but still had negative results afterwards.

I would love to know, from all my readers, what they think was going on in Tim's mind? Also, what would of been a better solution to Tim's abusive mess? Id love to see any scenario they come up with. It would be interesting to see who's side they are on too, in Tim's chapters.

This was absolutely wonderful. It's sad because of what Ginger must've felt like, & how compassionate John is in your story. It's funny how someone who ruined their relationship, possibly for good, bother asking that person of he was abused or not. You write well. Keep it up! <666

@ whiness
I like him in this chapter too!
Thank you!

Tim <3 I already love him in this story.

@ TheCorpseGentleman
Thank You.
I'm still working on some more things to add before Skold comes into the story. Will return updates soon.

God, this is so cute and well-executed! I love it, and love how Twiggy was this mysterious, random, cute transfer who was so shy and yet brave enough to come onto Brian. He knows what he wants lol. Keep up the good work!

@ Thatgothgirl
I agree 100%

Manson acts like a whore on stage. Ginger is an animal while playing drums. It makes perfect sense! (now if only, I found myself someone to cosplay as Manson...not saying that I look like Ginger at all..It would be fun.)

Thank You again!

@ TwiggyLeeManson
I agree. I love marilyn and twiggy slash....but MarilynxGinger just sounds so cute! For some reason I see manson as a bottom with ginger cause ginger is so quite but it's like he's an animal behind closed doors. c: btw, amazing story!

@ Thatgothgirl
Yes I see that almost everyone LOVE Jinger slash.

I, on the underhand, Would LOVE to see MarilynManson x GingerFish slash. I always wondered why Ginger remained in the band so long? He is always getting severely hurt because of Manson. The logical explanation is because Ginger was homeless before he joined the band, and couldn't go back to living in a car. The fantasy explanation, is because Manson may have a sick fetish of harming others, and enjoys make-up sex! Besides, drummers bang harder & faster. Singers scream louder!

Why doesn't anyone write any MansonXGinger slash stories? Mibba, im disappointed!

Thank You, for your comment. It's truly appreciated. Positive or Negative, I still love some input.

@ Kuolonenkeli
Im literally laughing. It's so hard to write a sex scene, especially with family around! I thought I should try writing a dirty scene, since I tried it in the past on a different story called "Plague" (Mibba) Also Known As "Tears and Love" (on Deviant Art), apparently it sucked. Yes, I know my grammar on certain words, could be misspelled, but that doesn't really surprise me.

Lastly, I might start working and practicing sexual themed stories. I already have inspiration for my next story. Im hoping that this new idea was not thought of before, and gets A LOT of comments and recommendations.

Thank You, and everyone else who has commented, for the support and comments I've been receiving on Disposable Teens. It is truly appreciated.

-TwiggyLeeManson

Fuck yes! It's so awesome that Ginger is their teacher it makes this all so... fun ;) Look, now you got me go dirty... But I loved! Only thing that I noticed in grammar was in sentence 'Your such a pedophile!" ' Where it should be you're but nothing else so I'm waiting for more and excited to read on :)