Water - Comments

  • @ losing control.
    Thank you so much! And yeah, a lot of people (alright, you and one other) think its based off of MCR. I mean, I love MCR and maybe The End inspired me a bit without me thinking about it.

    And I'm trying to get into a lot of charities and stuff. I like to walk dogs at the SPCA and usually donate but recently, I met someone who lost her mother to cancer and I want to do as much as I can to raise awareness and hopefully inspire some people.

    Thank you for your kind words (:
    August 8th, 2013 at 02:49am
  • Awe, this was really sad. Cancer is always a horrible thing, and it always makes it a little more heartbreaking when you read about children like this.

    It also reminded me of the MCR song, when I clicked on the story at first, I thought it was based off of the song, but I see that it wasn't. Either way, it was definitely an interesting plot line and it's awesome that you're so into getting people to support cancer research. It’s such an important thing to support.

    But yes, well done. I think you did a really good job with this plot and this issue.
    August 7th, 2013 at 10:30pm
  • @ M. Beckerdite
    I actually love that song! But when I was writing it, I wasn't really basing it on anything like a song haha
    August 6th, 2013 at 05:45pm
  • This was really good. It reminds me of a line from the song, "Cancer" by My Chemical Romance. It says, "If you could get me a drink of water because my lips are chapped and faded."
    August 6th, 2013 at 10:29am