Completely Undone - Comments

@ teenagedream91
I understand that they want to take advantage of their time together but it was a risk, a huge one. I wonder where you're taking this plot.

@ BlueDreams
It's out of her nature to come out and actually do something she bad been meaning to ask. Tom is like a puppy when it comes to her. He gets so happy he doesn't really think things through. It's so much easier for him to think clearly when he speaking to her over the phone than in person. Now that he was there in person he was so giddy he wanted to take her everywhere with him. Huge mistake and a big risk. They might get lucky and nothing happens but they might not. It all depends. I'm still brewing out ideas

I am actually really glad that Cinnie invited Tom to stay over. However, I did figure that inside she was a confusion. I mean, it's normal, I would be the same but he's just so happy to be there, it's cute and I hope she ends up enjoying it.
Well, Tom was carefully about the airport but not about the interviews? I mean, I understand that he wants to be with her but that wasn't very smart.

@ bxgurl95
Haha thanks so much. I love that you enjoy it so much

Lol the part about the boobs had me rolling. I love the way you write so effortlessly. Everything flows even the awkwardness and tension.

@ BlueDreams
Don't apologize. I was targeting her to be frustrating. One way or another my characters rise something out of readers lol

@ teenagedream91
It's just in my nature not to be so much like her, sorry xD

@ BlueDreams
It's to be expected. I knew Cinnie will be someone you want to pull their hair out of lol
They do and when they see each other they might show how much they missed each other.

@ teenagedream91
She does frustrate me a bit but I understand.
It will be cute but also kind of serious because they have things to decide.

@ BlueDreams
She's an overthinker and very cautious kind of gal. It will hurt her in the end for not thinking positively and she might frustrate you guys lol
As for Tom, I agree with you. Holding back can lead to serious pent up frustration and more. He will need to talk to her when he flies over.
I have a feeling it's going to be cute when he comes to the states.

I can't help but feel like Cinnie overthinks things and that makes her less positive and more keen on being so sad without Tom.
I appreciate Tom's attitude but I feel like suppressing his desire won't be good for him, in a way, however I hope it all works out for the best.
However, he's going over for a visit! I'm excited!!

@ bxgurl95
I'm glad too. I wanted to update, but then life got in the way. It is and they don't want to cross that line that will destroy them before they can even start. They are on thin ice, stepping forward making sure it's alright with the other.
No I appreciate your comment :) It's better than a one worded comment that really confuses me haha

So glad you updated!
I'm anxious to see their attitudes once they are reunited. They both have hesitations but they obviously want to be together but don't want to mess it up for the other and also this is new for them.
This is a pretty shitty comment but I don't have anything negative to say

@ teenagedream91
That's true.. oh my xD

@ BlueDreams
I'm glad that you are pleased with the way I portrayed you :)
We all feel bad for him. I always have characters reluctant to be with Tom huh? Lol I didn't see it until now.
It can be. I can't tell you much yet haha
Thank you :) I tried for it to be good but not dramatic or overly cheesy

@ teenagedream91
It still amazes me though :)
I understand her point but I feel a bit bad for him all the same, though.
Well yes.. it seemed like their first snog and hers as well haha
This one was fantastic, let me tell you!

@ BlueDreams
I got to know you over the course of two years it's a natural ability to deduce what your reactions might be like especially we talk about everything and anything lol. I'm glad I got you spot on.
Honestly I don't have anything majored planned right now lol I have a few things that will shift their relationship good and bad but nothing to build up to that point or anything that will be the climax.
Cinnie is hesitant about moving forward with Tom for a reason. We don't know a lot about her and Tom is still getting to know her. He forgets they were barely friends as it is before they started dating. Cinnie wants to be sure with Tom.
First time for what? A snog? Seems like it was her first make out session huh? She turned out to be adorable more adorable than I was expecting lol
It was heartbreaking and I got so into their departure from one another I'm happy with the result of it. Usually I suck with goodbyes lol or writing them

I just.. I'm overwhelmed at how well you portray me. It's pretty much spot on, how.. how?! haha
Their last time together was really sad for me to read but I really feel like there is a plan ahead, I'm just not sure what.
However her reaction to him asking about them being exclusive, disappointed m a bit. I understand where she's coming from but I was hoping she'd leap into it with Tom.
I am a bit confused but this almost was their first time together, yes? And that was her first french kiss apparently, this is just too cute!
Their goodbye was just really very very sad, though. I'm cheering for them here!

@ bxgurl95
Thank you :) that's what I'm going for. Cinnie is going to be sweet and naive sort of while Tom is going to be the aggressive one when it comes to the relationship. Oh and the drama you will have to wait and see

These two are too cute. I like how naive she seems and how aggressive Tom is. :)