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  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Haha!
    This chapter made me laugh!
    Can't wait to read more!!
    August 21st, 2013 at 01:21am
  • helena_88

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    well that explains why she's so horny all the time Mr. Green and I bet it's going to be real interesting on the tour once her hubby has to go home.....
    August 20th, 2013 at 12:02pm
  • foREVer_Synyster

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    Interesting :) I love Lucian, he's so adorable. Jimmy makes me smile so much in this story. First he goes crazy over a girl crashing into his friend and then he argues with a six year old. Gotta love him. Update soon! <3
    August 14th, 2013 at 07:11pm
  • helena_88

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    oh my gosh I already adore Lucian! it was a goose..!! lmao! so cute!!
    oooh boy, bri should keep his mouth shut, something tells me that she'll find out that he told matt.. prob. matts fault too.. either drunk talk or he's just gonna eye her weirdly Mr. Green
    August 13th, 2013 at 10:05am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Oh god, I envision Matt getting drunk and saying something stupid to her and thus outta Brian and his big mouth. Lol. I can't wait for more of this. Love it!! Also loved Jimmy arguing with a six year old. Lol
    August 13th, 2013 at 01:04am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    I knew it!!
    Hopefully Matt doesn't get Brian into trouble...
    Please update soon!
    August 12th, 2013 at 10:57pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Wow...
    Please update soon!
    August 10th, 2013 at 02:26pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    you feel ridiculous writing this stuff!? No need my friend, this was simply awesome! I LOVE this story so far, and I am so excited for this story. I have been waiting for something like this! Can't wait to see what happens with her and Matt. The tag team was pretty hot too, I'd gladly entertain the thought of Gates joining in!
    August 10th, 2013 at 06:23am
  • BehindGreenEyes

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    Don't feel ridiculous, you are an amazing writer and just wrote an awesome chapter! Cant wait for more!
    August 10th, 2013 at 01:25am
  • brianna7x

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    Love this, it's so different from other stories and very well-written!
    August 9th, 2013 at 11:56pm
  • BelovedSyn

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    I feel awkward myself, which is half the reason why I don't put them in there or I have someone else help me out. I think it was pretty awesome :D

    More soon, please :D?
    August 9th, 2013 at 11:17pm
  • eli666_

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    I want a husband like that. But that husband has to be Brian. PERFECT CHAPTER, more like this please, or I'll die :c
    August 9th, 2013 at 09:07pm
  • BelovedSyn

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    Awww, you're welcome! <3 I am so glad you like it!

    TO THE IMPORTANT MATTER.

    Yes, patience is a virtue. But cliffhangers such balls.
    This is such an interesting story and I love it and I CANNOT wait to see where you go with this.
    August 9th, 2013 at 04:13am
  • helena_88

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    aah dude cliffhanger!! Mr. Green
    heheh so bri accepted the offer, figured that he would and the rules are good ones too..
    August 8th, 2013 at 10:56pm
  • Foos922

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    Man, that's just harsh! Lol. Update soon. I'm dyin here.
    August 8th, 2013 at 10:33pm
  • BelovedSyn

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    Uhm.
    Where is the rest of this story? :P
    Jesus. You're just amazing. Your writing. Your plots. Your characters. This is so different from your other story, but I fucking love it! I can make a banner and such for this one, too, if you would like? :D
    August 8th, 2013 at 03:01pm
  • popprincess101

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    more more more more! i love this story already. love your writing and i love how your mind works <3 just love for you 5ever. keep it up <3
    August 8th, 2013 at 01:37pm
  • helena_88

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    i'm totally lovin' this story already Mr. Green she seem like a firecracker, the bass-player- i wonder what's up with him? and matt already being all smitten.. nice!! and bri probably being invited to have some fun??? wooop!
    August 8th, 2013 at 10:42am
  • laurenxa7x

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    Sooooooooo I officially love you and your style of writing. Mr. Green
    August 8th, 2013 at 10:23am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I like it! I feel like there are gonna be a lot of twists and turns and drama along with the increased smut! =)
    August 8th, 2013 at 09:36am