Slut - Comments

Oh wow, this was well written. It really makes the reader think

defintly needs to bloom into a story :) good luck and i really like it so far it had a great hook :)

@ birdbones

I was thinking on adding more. Like a backstory on how both friends got into that position.

@ Fair

Thank you. It was completely random.

interesting

interesting

I am completely against the term slut, but I certainly did have a lot of really good feelings about this. Strength, is the biggest thing I noticed. Your writing was strong, you emotions, the brunette's words and the backbone that Heather showed. I would love to see more of this, even if you intended on keeping a stand alone. So wonderful though.

I don't know why I enjoyed reading this as much as I did, but I did.

I feel as though it kind of encompassed a lot of different definitions of the word slut in this story. Like, how some people think a slut is a, b and c things, it touched on a lot of those.
I really felt all the rage, anticipation and just strong emotion in this piece and the message to end it all was just This was really good, and even if it is just something you thought up kinda randomly or something, it was still amazing.