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  • fiction246

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    Aww :) he got his hair cut like Edgar!!!! So cute!!!! Great double update :D looking forward to more!!!
    February 6th, 2014 at 02:14pm
  • Harley91594

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    This story is so cute! It is interesting to see a story with a kid's point of view, I havent read something like this since I read Junie B. Jones when I was a kid.
    February 6th, 2014 at 05:05am
  • fiction246

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    Truthfully, I love stories with kids in them. I love writing stories with kids and I love when other people write them too and I really love this!!! I love the way you write kaiser and his relationship with Landon is really sweet!!! Hope you update again soon :) I'm hoping Jarred will be a good friend for Kaiser!!!
    January 22nd, 2014 at 08:31am
  • Fridaysbloom

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    Ahhhhhhhh please update this again soon I absolutely love this story it's epic!
    January 11th, 2014 at 03:25am
  • perfectxxangelx

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    I I seriously LOVE this story! I was getting so sick of the recycled plots on this site, and then I found yours and FELL IN LOVE. I NEED you to write the next chapter ASAP! PLEASE. I love your writing style, the characters, just everything!
    January 10th, 2014 at 09:38am
  • fiction246

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    I'M STILL HERE!!! I don't like pestering people for updates but I do love this story :) I'm happy that you have updated!!!!
    January 10th, 2014 at 08:54am
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    Poor Kaiser!!! I just want to give him a cuddle!!! I hope Haley does come back :) can't wait for more!!!
    November 14th, 2013 at 06:55am
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    Haha oh my gosh, that bit with Brian at the end was really sweet!!!! But I cant believe Haley is going away!!!
    November 12th, 2013 at 09:22am
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    Yeah so Landon is awesome :) thanks for updating so quickly :) looking forward to more!!! Poor Haley...that's horrible!!!
    November 12th, 2013 at 07:54am
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    Oh my gosh I can't believe they are running away!!! Landon is going to freak out!!!! Looking forward to seeing what happens next :)
    November 12th, 2013 at 06:43am
  • Star Angel

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    Update soon please
    September 30th, 2013 at 08:26am
  • fiction246

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    :( Hayley!!! I hope kaiser tells Landon about hayley!!! I really love this story :)
    September 28th, 2013 at 10:41am
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    Aww so sweet, sticking up for their girlfriends!!!! I love it :) looking forward to more!!! I'm glad kaiser has good friends!!!
    September 25th, 2013 at 09:32am
  • Star Angel

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    Love this please update soon
    September 25th, 2013 at 08:45am
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    Little toughies c:
    September 25th, 2013 at 06:08am
  • southpaw

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    This is really cute and heartwarming, and it comes across as so natural, which I was initially worried about, since it's hard to write from a child's point of view. You've got it spot-on and you've got a great handle on how little kids truly act - too many authors either write them to seem too young or too old, and it's very realistic here. Plus, I love Landon and his relationship with Kaiser! It's so cute to see him reach out like that and be such a kind brother, especially after what Kaiser has been through. Anyways, this is amazing, and I'm definitely eager to read more!! :D
    September 25th, 2013 at 03:27am
  • fiction246

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    “Stop staring at my boyfriend!” Haha oh my gosh!!! So cute :) and Henry and Lacey seem like they will be good friends!! Looking forward to more :)
    September 24th, 2013 at 08:00am
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    Haley is adorable! And her vocabulary is great for a little girl lol
    September 24th, 2013 at 07:29am
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    I really love how caring Landon is!
    September 24th, 2013 at 03:14am
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    Awe Brian kissed his head :,)
    September 23rd, 2013 at 05:38pm