This story is so cute! It is interesting to see a story with a kid's point of view, I havent read something like this since I read Junie B. Jones when I was a kid.
Truthfully, I love stories with kids in them. I love writing stories with kids and I love when other people write them too and I really love this!!! I love the way you write kaiser and his relationship with Landon is really sweet!!! Hope you update again soon :) I'm hoping Jarred will be a good friend for Kaiser!!!
I I seriously LOVE this story! I was getting so sick of the recycled plots on this site, and then I found yours and FELL IN LOVE. I NEED you to write the next chapter ASAP! PLEASE. I love your writing style, the characters, just everything!
This is really cute and heartwarming, and it comes across as so natural, which I was initially worried about, since it's hard to write from a child's point of view. You've got it spot-on and you've got a great handle on how little kids truly act - too many authors either write them to seem too young or too old, and it's very realistic here. Plus, I love Landon and his relationship with Kaiser! It's so cute to see him reach out like that and be such a kind brother, especially after what Kaiser has been through. Anyways, this is amazing, and I'm definitely eager to read more!! :D