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  • losing control.

    losing control. (4250)

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    Why is everything you write so perfect, ahhhh.

    This was just...perfection. I adore how you wrote it, it almost felt like a mix of first and second person, which was really awesome and interesting to read. I loved how everything was incredibly vague in the beginning, and you built up to all the explanations really, really well.

    It was really great how you kept everything really mysterious, but still managed to tie everything together in the end. It made me want to keep reading, and I was really satisfied with the ending. You’re really good at ending stories at the perfect moment.

    Your writing is perfection, girl. Amazing job.
    August 24th, 2013 at 10:07pm
  • What...

    What... (1400)

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    I loved that so much I can't even explain it to you right now Cry I just love it so much.
    August 22nd, 2013 at 09:56pm
  • Fandango

    Fandango (775)

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    Stunning In Love
    August 14th, 2013 at 06:53pm