The Tenth Night - Comments

Veronica sounds like a terrible person so far, but maybe I'll learn different later on.

OK I'll just read more because the second one sounds like she might the the our a killer too.

This story is very interesting even though and I've only read the first chapter and the prologue, even though the summary caught my attention instantly. So is Rae the killer? Is this like a Light Yagami Death Note deal where she kills the wicked, you know what light was doing before he got super god complex and just started killing everyone? By the way I love the layout it fits the tone of the story so well.

Summary - Creepy. I love how it gives me the feeling that it's like an episode of Criminal Minds.

Chapter 1 - Descriptive and everything portrayed in my head like a movie. Mr. Lawson makes it so obvious that he's the one who behind the bruises! I love how you described his eyes. It gives a lot of depth to what he's feeling during the heat of the moment.

The ending made me uneasy. I wonder if she's who everyone is talking about in the summary?

Chapter 2 - I'm loving Eriko's character! She's one of those that one really can't judge by what's on the outside.

AND THE ENDING! YOU'RE MESSING WITH MY EMOTIONS!

From what I read so far, it can be a tad difficult to keep track of the characters but it isn't that distracting at the same time. Now I must keep reading so I can find out what the hell is going on!

although it is a little hard to keep track of the characters at first, i love the organization of this story.

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what is this, gabbe? what is this beauty? this is beautiful and the layout is beautiful and the writing is beautiful. and i love how haunting some of the lines are.

I absolutely love this. I have to keep reading because I have to know whats going on. WHAT IS GOING ON!
This is awesome.

Wow! This is really interesting so far. Your writing is wonderful and I can't wait to read more.