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Awe....!!

Well worth the wait

Ooo....me likey and I too hope people aren't hurt by the fire :(

Hmmm....so maybe something special about her?

Heehee :) more!

I love this chappy :) I can't wait for more

Heehee, I loved the "I can decapitate you three quick enough that no one notices"

Holy shit....

Aw....poor Chris

Oh.-.
Holy fuck...

Hell yes! That was awesome!!

I love that! They made up :) I just want longer chappies, I can't get enough of it!

I don't think he is. Demons(at least this is what I've gathered from reading up and researching on them) get extremely attached, and over-protective of their counterparts. It makes sense that he's reacting like he is,

So an alpha demon is born, not bitten...then which one is the alpha? I'm confused on that part, sorry if I'm dense lol. Chris is overreacting, but at the same time he's not

I love how you put that little note to Ange in there xD
Hopefully, it'll go over a little smoother.
Dear baby Satan, though. Makes me think alpha demons are really, really fucking bad to hunters O.O

Please don't hurt Kuza or Francesca;-;
Please;-;

Holy shit, this can't be good!

That was cute and all I can suggest is find an editor, sorry I can't think of something better to help

Awe!!!! How cute! <3

I loved it!