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  • I read this all over the past 2 days and I loved it so so so much!!!! It was really good. I loved every chapter and I swear I had the shock of my life when I heard that Gerard was alive!!!!! Im gonna read the sequal tomorrow!
    July 2nd, 2012 at 01:03am
  • I just wanted to say that I loved this story! and I will read the sequel tomorrow, as I sort of stayed up late to finish reading this one.
    Its weird how I managed to go mute myself reading this. I read all the chapters from 7pm to 2:30am.
    Around 9pm I went and made some food and my house mates were trying to talk to me, but I went mute and just nodded at things they were saying... Its kinder funny.
    I loved this story so much. It was sooo fricking cute.
    I will go to now. <3
    September 25th, 2011 at 03:35am
  • punki3_pappy:
    *starts chant* sequal sequal sequal!!!
    August 18th, 2008 at 03:04pm
  • *starts chant* sequal sequal sequal!!!
    August 11th, 2008 at 06:07am
  • I hope you do post a sequal.
    That was too big of a cliffy to leave us with xD

    I hope you post a sequal!
    *sits with fingers crossed*
    I loved this story!
    August 11th, 2008 at 12:32am
  • Well of course we want a sequel!
    I know how you feel about not being able to write it right now... and there's no point if your heart isn't in it, right?
    So write when you can, and make it good =D :tehe:
    Well done on writing a fantastic story... I'm holding my breath for a sequel!

    xoxoxox

    EDIT - by the way... I was naughty and read Lightning Zap's invisible comment.. And i love that idea... *crosses fingers*
    But no duh, it's your story, your choice :XD
    :arms:
    August 9th, 2008 at 09:42pm
  • p.s. need sequel! it would be a mean thing not to make one. :shifty
    August 9th, 2008 at 12:34am
  • brailliant story! only just found it. Wow

    *subscribes*

    :arms: :cute:
    August 9th, 2008 at 12:32am
  • -sniff-
    i'm so happy =]
    you remembered me =]
    gah, all these people commented and you mentioned them and i felt really left out and now you remembered me -wipes away tear-
    thank you =']
    okay, so onto the story...we can wait for the sequel =]
    god bless mikey, he's quite adorable =]
    i actually love this story, seriously. i shall stay subscribed and wait avidly for the sequel =]
    Love x♥x
    August 8th, 2008 at 10:14pm
  • The end! :O

    Wow...I really like the way you leave it open, y'know? Uncertain?

    And, really, don't worry about the sequel. You need time for yourself until you're involved on a story again; being a sequel or a new one. Maybe the mafia that killed Mikey's parents could return, who knows?

    But it certainly was a good story. Sometimes plots start off being original, and then get stuck in this certain event; the same things happen over and over and you just wanna say 'get over it!'

    That certainly never happened in this story. It kept going and there was always a mystery to discover. So, yeah. Congratulations on making 40 great chapters!

    xx
    August 8th, 2008 at 10:05pm
  • Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

    That is all.
    August 8th, 2008 at 07:45pm
  • lol hi again.
    just another lil comment.
    quoting Lightning Zap, it happened to me nearly all the time that i couldn't see the subscription update, and yeah, i kept checkin everyday to see if you had updated, too.
    and always referring to Lightning Zap's comment, i read the idea for the sequel and i think it's a really good one!! i'v said it all with this so, yeah.
    whenever you'v got your ideas in the right place to do a sequel, then we'll all be ready to read it as well.

    take care
    x
    August 8th, 2008 at 01:20pm
  • ................oh.
    ya know i am actually a bit sad that this story's finished.
    i used to really look forward to any update, and HELL YES of course i'd love a sequel!
    but right now i'm all "awwww"ing over mikey n frank, so take your time in writing. no hurry. writer's block sucks, i know for experience. i'v got 3 stories that i'v started and stopped because of a writer's block. i'm not updatin often and it's really frustrating when you'r not completely satisfied with a chapter. so yeah, i understand if you say you don't know what to write.
    but yeah, i'v got another idea right now so i'm writing "the american idiot musical." lol hope it won't end up like my other stories.

    i already mentioned it, but i'm gonna repeat it anyway. take your time in writing, all of your readers (me in the top ten ^^ ) will understand and be patient.
    who knows, maybe in the meanwhile i might as well read the story again when i'm bored.

    wow this was one hell of a long comment. lol

    well, take care.
    bye
    _Lena_
    xoxo
    August 8th, 2008 at 01:14pm
  • Awww.
    I want a sequal! Pweaseeee?
    Take your time though. This really is one of my favoritest story. =]
    Loved it and can't wait for the continuation.
    <3 TinaxTerror
    August 8th, 2008 at 07:45am
  • Yup I recc'd your story :XD
    But I was rude and didn't comment from the time I found it until now. **blushes** And now I feel bad. So I'll try and make this comment a little bit longer than the standard comment.

    I loved this story a lot. It was one of the subscriptions that I kept up to date with. Sometimes it wouldn't tell me that you'd updated, so everyday I'd check on this story as well as a few others to see whether you'd updated.

    It was really cool how you had Mikey as a mute, and I loved the twist it took when you wrote that Gerard was alive. I wasn't expecting that at all. I loved how you described the story. You did really well.

    As for your sequel, I do have an idea, which I have put in white invisible writing below for you to highlight which might help to bring the story along a little.

    You could have Frank and Mikey have a fight somewhere along in the story to keep the plot going. They could break up for a couple of weeks which leads to Mikey not talking again, since Frank was the person who helped him to talk again. Even Gerard can't get Mikey to talk, and he gets worried and calls up the care place to find out what they used to do when Mikey was mute. Bob could overhear the conversation on the phone (I loved it in this story how he was nosy... I think he should reappear again) and then get angry and pay Frank a visit where he yells at Frank who is equally as heartbroken as Mikey is. Bob lets Frank know that Mikey has gone back to not talking, and it worries Frank who then decides to pay a visit to Mikey where they sort everything out and get back together. Something like that mini-plot within your big plot could fill up about 4 or 5 chapters. Of course, this was just a suggestion. You don't have to use it at all.
    August 8th, 2008 at 07:36am
  • In Love

    i loved reading this! i so did!

    i'm actually glad you're not going to start a sequel and that it's open for that option. it could go so many ways and i'm actually content with thinking in my own mind that they do make it.

    i love how gerard just fit right in with frank and mikey, how in this last chapter he really did play the big brother card, he gave sound advice that they seriously contemplated.

    i loved how frank was the one to pretty much slap mikey in the face with the whole 'i believe we can do this' bit and mikey was the one to freak out. it's good to have insecurities about long distance...it's even better to have hope that it'll work.

    i actually loved this ending! i did. it's definitely been one of my favorite stories to read!! Clap
    August 8th, 2008 at 05:55am
  • I understand completely, if you can't write the sequel right now, that's okay. I would love to eventually see one, but, if you don't want to write one, that's okay too.

    Anyray, this has been one of my favorite stories on mibba, it's very sad to see it end. I'm glad Mikey and Frank found a way to make everything work. You are so talented, I was in awe after every update. This story even made me cry, a lot actually. Thank you so much for devoting so much time to writing this, I enjoyed it so much.

    Hugs and kisses!

    Edit: Pageclaim! I shall call this page "The End"
    August 8th, 2008 at 05:45am
  • They'll make it through, fur sure!

    I loved this story, I'm sad to see it end :sad:

    But if there's a sequel, I'll be there through it all. Ha.
    August 8th, 2008 at 04:39am
  • awesome ending
    August 8th, 2008 at 03:22am
  • AWWWWWWW!!!!

    Well, it is your choice to have a sequel. and I hope that you will someday make a sequel for this, since you have a very amazing story here!

    The ending was cute though. I loved it! It was a wonderful place to stop, or put a sequel on!

    Update Spoon! (whenever you are ready, if ever)
    August 8th, 2008 at 02:45am