Nocturnal - Comments

@ Altair
Hahaha, thank you!

I LOVE THE GOO GOO DOLLS!! Just started reading today and I love it so much! Cam just won my heart!

I really like this. I love your characters, and after the first chapter I'm hooked and I'm going to keep reading! Great job!

PS STOP LEAVING ME WITH CLIFF HANGERS MY DELICATE SLEF CANT HANDLE IT

Why am I the only one commenting and why do you only have 6 recommendations? Dammit all! So this chapter was full of all sorts of feels again! had me crying and then confused becasue when she was with Cam it seemed like she forgot her whole family died besides Henry and even Cam acted like it didnt happen, but at the same time it was a really cute hot moment between them! Until Henry woke up lol DAMMIT WHEN DO I GET TO SEE THEM KISSS????? UGH BUT OH HELL NO YOU BETTER NOT KILL OFF CAM TOO OR I SWEAR TO GOD!!!!! You just cant do that! seriosuyl it would ruin the whole story for me :c Why did Raph tell them about the Fallen/human offspring things???? there has to be a way to cure him right? HE CANT DIE

Im fucking crying, you ont even know! I am literally...tears just tears everywhere. My dad came in and aske dme what the hell was wrong with me! I loved this but hated it at the same time if that makes sense! I cant believe they all died. All of them! Although thank you, thank you so much for not killing Henry! I dont think I could have handeled a dead little brother! and I cant believe I blamed Rose for her dream and didnt connect the dots of a fire back to what happened to Cam and Phillip! Why didnt Cam want to go with Nina, was it to make sure she wouldnt have to be in any more pain if soemthing happened to Henry but then Phillip could have gone! Or maybe he just didnt want to see Nina in pain anymore! Oh god! I cant wait to read what happens next and what Cam and Phillip have to say about what happened. Whats going to happen to Nina and Henry! IS Henry going to be ok? I AM FREAKING OUT AND CRYING AND UGH SO POWERFUL

N'aaww what a sweet moment they shared! it was too perfect! I love That he is FINALLY opening up to Nina! and Yikes I knew something wrong was going to happen but I though it was going to be the school dance! Not her family being trapped in her burning house! Im freaking out! you can NOT leave me with that sort of Cliff hanger unless you are going to update stat!!! I feel like her evil step mom is responsible but I doubt it, i just hate her guts !! I wonder what people thought of Cam and Ninas show btw! I mean they werent exactly just dancing lol pretty much Nina was being seduced by Cameron! So beautiful! I was just pulled into their little bubble and then BAM she gets a horrible vision! (im jumping all over! Im sorry!) anyways amazing work! Keep it up! and please dont leave me *ahem* us readers waiting too long!!!!

I feeel like a creep because I just happened to check back to see if any update was made on any of my stories and Bam Nocturnal updated 1minute ago xD hahaha So of course Im like HELL YES!! And read it! And here I am commenting (again) But wow! The beginning of the chapter started out slow and I though this was just going to be a filler and was a little disapointed but HOT DAMN that ending!!! *swoon* anyways before I get to that! Im glad V and Dawn are getting back on normal grounds with eachother and that Nina and Phil could convince Vanessa to go out with her and Dawn for Nina's birthday! andyay! her dad is in town and she has a new car!!!! yay : although I dont like her step mom at all. Not one bit.. So Im not looking fwd to her being there for a week. But seriously that letter Cam wrote Nina! I made my heart swoon! So sweeet!!!!! who would havethought he could be so thoughtful! (besides me, I always knew he was a romantic lol) and the necklace! AWWWWW c: And their little talk! I just cant even right now! I cant wait for another update !!

Yikes lots of hostility!! Nina is overthinking everything! If she can't honestly see hw much Cam cares about her and just wants her to beable to control her ability than she is crazy! Also Im not too happy with the idea og uncle angel helping her cntrol her power! *sigh*
This is a short comment bcause i have to go and I read this 3 days ago but forgot to comment lol and I need another update going through withdrawls! lol

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Getting antsy again! Im telling you, honestly may be the best story I have read in since Ms.Marauder stopped posting online stories (and she had some real talent! I believe she won some contest to publish one of her stories too) and Im DYING to read more lol

that was amazing! the intimacy was perfect! and god, I just feel like Cam loves Nina so much! and he was so delicate with her and PROUD and it was perfect. Absolutely perfect. I just, my entire body was tingling, I think I was holding my breath nearly this entire chapter And when i read this, I feel like I AM Nina I get so wrapped up in the story its almost as if I completely forget Im a seperate person from her. I feel what she's feeling and it just shows what a wonderful writer you are. There has been a total of 5 maaybe 6 times I have ever been so enthralled with a story/book and this makes top 3. Ive never been bored reading this once. I love it! I just wish you'd update more! I hate having to wait for a new chapter. I literally check like 3x a day! when I wake up, my lunch break and when I get home from work (and sometimes multiple times after I get home from work as well lol)

This is so good! I can't wait to read more.

Im DYING with out an update love!!! its been days!! I miss your daily updates when you first started the story!! lol

Im DYING with out an update love!!! its been days!! I miss your daily updates when you first started the story!! lol

KJKSHFJLSIDTYFJGHHT Don't mind me just doing my happy dance!!!!!! *DANCES HAPPY DANCE!!* AAAHHH This was so incredibly AHHHH perfect!! Cam is always there for her! and I dont even know! it's like they are intimate with out even realizing it! Like that whole convo in the library was just so incredible! It's like he's finally ready to put himself out there for Nina and it was soo fucking cute and intense and hot at the same time. And that was some deep shit they were talking about (even in relation to the book, but it felt like they werent only talking about the book) Although that stuff about healng from just about anything! lets hope tht means he can heal and come back from whatever causes him to die in her dream! I would bawl my eyes out if he died for reals! and Cam is right! how can she be so quick and witty with him, the scariest guy around (sarcasm) and so shy and intimidated by a bunch of regular teenage students! She has backbone! USE IT GIRL! Anyways! Holy sht I thought Cam was going to kill that kid! I wonder what awful thing her called/said about Nina! Because he was PISSED! and what a scene it caused! but naaawww I was nice to see some of Dawn and have some girl talk! Im glad she admitted to not seeing any passion in Nina and Phillips relationship, but it's odd that V and Cam's was the same way lol Also glad she called out the fiery passion between Cam and Nina! Bout damn time Dawn! Where were you llike 15 chapters ago when she decided to date Phillip instead! Ugh! (oh wait thats right, chearing them on xD) Dawn and Zeke are so cuute too though! even though they arent main characters its nice that you make it obvious that they have a life too, it makes the characters seem real and I can invision what they would be up to outside the lines of the story you know? Cant wait to see what happens next and to find out what Nina REALLY decides to do for Halloween! and will she ever make up with Vanessa and Phillip! And OH MYGOD I ALMOST FORGOT! So no one knew Cam sang or played guitar?? and he played for Nina when she asked! n'aaww sooo cuuute!! Anyways Im curious with everyone acting like Nina did something wrong in the relationship to make it end, had no one noticed Phillip always running off with vanessa?

Sorry I havent commented or read lately! Family stuff going on so I didnt have time! and this comment is going to be short (actually short this time) but trust me I looove the past whatever many chapters I just caught up on! Like I can't even! So much shit has happened! and Balls man!! Nina is a descendent of a Nephilim!! didnt see that one coming either!! lol and an ANGEL! a fucking ANGEL showed up! Im interested in this mission too! Like how are they going to search for it AND go to school? I wonder what'll happen when her mom sees her arm and sees her car missing. Does Nina's power come from her mom's side? and most importantly AAAHHH CAM AND NINA!! SO FUCKING CUTE!!! Finally shit's starting to move along with them...sort of. AHH c: and her and Phillip are obviously done (I hope) THANK GOD! I soo called that he had an ulterior motive (although this was NOT what I thought it was) and I also called his feelings for Vanessa! Im good dammit! bout time Nina lost her shit on him! UGH! But shes walking though that forrest alone. Didnt Cam say not to do that? Does someone go after her? I hope so!! I cant wait for the next chapter! (It seems like you dont do daily updates anymore though lol otherwise I would have been waaay farther behind! Hope the next ones is soon!)

This is a great story. I can't wait to read more.

This one is going to be a shortish comment (maybe lol) but holy hell! what dickwads go to Nina's school!! Ugh! I would rip their throats out if I were her boyfriend! Seriously painting SLUT or w.e. on the side of her car?!? WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK! and I feel like Cam was more pissed about this than Phillip was! And *sigh* I love Vanessa I really do lol I feel like she "gets" Nina better than Dawn does! Speaking of, I feel like theres been less and less of Dawn and what there is of her is only fleeting mentions of her :/ Im curious how she's taking all of this crazy and if she knows Vanessa hangs out with Nina but not her! AND NOW ONTO THE KICKASS MIND BLOWING PART!!!! HOLY FUCK OUT OF EVERYTHING I HAD SUSPECTED NEPHILIM WAS SURE AS HELL NOT ON MY LIST!! I looove thiiiss! What was that thing that attacked them? I wonder if my suspicions of Vanessa are still right then? hmmmm, and That makes me curious if Nina is one of them too or if she is something different and this still doesnt explain the tingly sensation she gets EVERY SINGLE TIME Cam is anywhere near her to let her know he's there. Speaking of...Does Cam get that feeling too?? Im just excited that her dram finally came to pass (or one of them, I hope the forrest never does because Im SURE that was cam in her dream dying because I remember her smelling him and saying he smelled familiar! like maybe, just spitballing here, she smelled that in her dream) I LOVE THIS STORY! SO MUCH! I cant believe you left me *ahem* everyone with a cliff hanger! ahhh Im dying to know what happens next! If Vanessa is going to live and why she was just screaming for Phillip (again I feel like there is something going on there lol) AHHHH update soooon pleeaaasee Im dying over here! I need to knooow!

I feel like my comments just get longer and longer every time lol why am I the only one commenting anyways?

I feel like my comments just get longer and longer every time lol why am I the only one commenting anyways?