One Pack of Smokes from Broke - Comments

  • losing control.

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    Double posted Facepalm
    August 24th, 2013 at 09:03pm
  • losing control.

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    I love how you wrote about two of my favourite songs by The Maine, and the stories you wrote were flawless.

    I love stories like this, where you write about a tiny part of someone's life and just leave it like that, so the readers can imagine what they want about the characters. You created your characters really well for having such a small amount of words, they didn't lack depth at all and were really real, I guess you could say.

    I really liked how simple you kept this as well. You didn’t go into crazy detail, but the details you put in were perfect for the story.

    Lovely job!
    August 24th, 2013 at 09:03pm