August 19th, 2013 at 12:43am
Be still my beating heart, this chapter was beautiful!! Brian is absolutely adorable in this, the way he gets so nervous and battles with himself, you write this type of character so well!!
shsdjsdjsdj I'm blushing!! XD No one has ever described me like that before, thank you!! <3 That's exactly how I am, I'm shy and clumsy and a bit of an idiot haha.
I'm in love with this here story, there's something so sweet and innocent about it, the way he struggles to go to the restaurant to come and see me, but still makes himself go because he has to see me (I wish haha). And I've noticed him too, (obviously), but I would never approach him, or anyone for the matter, so I like that I'm admiring him from afar.
Two updates in one day, well done bubby! But relax now, and I'll try and get your story done! :D
I think this is the most I've ever been in love with Brian. Again, pretty sure I've never come across a story where he was like this, or even just shy, and it's adorable. It really is, you know if you put aside the fact that he's in a panic and is probably feeling like hell. He's also really relatable as well, for me, so that just makes me love him more, and I'm anxiously waiting for him to get up the courage to talk to Rachel even more.
I also love the relationship between Brian and Matt, and I'm kind of hoping you expand on that a little more in this, even though this story is more about Brian and Rachel. I just like the bromance. XD
Can't wait for more! :D