And Then I Found Hope - Comments

  • Synful Shadows

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    It only took half a chapter to fall in love with this, and I'm kind of glad you already have two chapters up already. I love the social anxiety. I don't think I've come across another story with that, especially with one of the guys having it, and from what I can tell you're doing it well. (I honestly don't know that much about social anxiety, just little things here and there.)

    I think this is the most I've ever been in love with Brian. Again, pretty sure I've never come across a story where he was like this, or even just shy, and it's adorable. It really is, you know if you put aside the fact that he's in a panic and is probably feeling like hell. He's also really relatable as well, for me, so that just makes me love him more, and I'm anxiously waiting for him to get up the courage to talk to Rachel even more.

    I also love the relationship between Brian and Matt, and I'm kind of hoping you expand on that a little more in this, even though this story is more about Brian and Rachel. I just like the bromance. XD

    Can't wait for more! :D
    August 19th, 2013 at 12:43am
  • heretic.

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    Be still my beating heart, this chapter was beautiful!! Brian is absolutely adorable in this, the way he gets so nervous and battles with himself, you write this type of character so well!!

    shsdjsdjsdj I'm blushing!! XD No one has ever described me like that before, thank you!! <3 That's exactly how I am, I'm shy and clumsy and a bit of an idiot haha.

    I'm in love with this here story, there's something so sweet and innocent about it, the way he struggles to go to the restaurant to come and see me, but still makes himself go because he has to see me (I wish haha). And I've noticed him too, (obviously), but I would never approach him, or anyone for the matter, so I like that I'm admiring him from afar.

    Two updates in one day, well done bubby! But relax now, and I'll try and get your story done! :D
    August 18th, 2013 at 08:57pm
  • CountSynula

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    Another swell story of yours that I am now addicted to. This will be at the top of my list of stories that make me excited to read and that get updated! I love the way you portray Syn! I like how he need these girls. Plus I like that you added in the social anxiety. It makes Brian seem normal like the rest of us. Can't wait for more and Rachel is very lucky! Wink
    August 18th, 2013 at 06:39pm
  • heretic.

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    You always have the best ideas! <3
    I love that you've started it off explaining about Brian and his life. I think it's so sweet that Matt is his rock, his best friend, the person he can turn to in his times of need.

    Yes, I am the clumsiest person in the world! Haha. I'm surprised I didn't hit anyone or poke anyone's eyes out, I've done that before xD

    I can't wait for the next chapter, can't wait for him to see her, for them to talk. I have the biggest smile on my face right now, you wouldn't believe how much I am swooning and sighing happily haha.

    You need to come here and hug me right now please!

    <3
    August 18th, 2013 at 05:32pm
  • heretic.

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    I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS ALREADY ♥
    August 18th, 2013 at 05:17pm